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for Love, Lies & Loneliness

by harriet

person chantalmalfoy
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! MORE!

Sirius used an Unforgivable? What was Dumbledore doing there? I need to know if Harry and Snape are okay!!!!

Update, please.
person Chys
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU ROCK! *hasn\'t even read the update yet!*

Hehe. *off to read now*


Chys
person mlp54875
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh can\'t wait until you update again! :)

such an awesome story!
person LustyMuse
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t you DARE leave it there!

And if you want someone to flick through for errors, toss it my way :) helenpluck@gmail.com I\'ll even do previous chapters if people are browbeating you about it
person armpit (No I do not smell like one)
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah:P yes my nickname!:P well I had to fill in SOMETHING!:P

Well, I\'m SO happy:D
Breathtaking, really, and a nasty cliffhanger! >.< (I like the way it is, it\'s cool as a LONG story)

May I ask you where you\'re from?:P
and your muse...ah well, teach it to \'safe\'some of my delicious gifts!

Ta!

Armpit...bwha.
person Chys
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN THAT WAS GOOD! And ah hell, cliffie?

*crying*


Chys
person Kat
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, what a place to end this. I am not scarred but I am desperately hanging out for more. You captured Sirius so well, I could totally feel his anger and pain and that it came from his love of Harry and his feelings of his own failure regarding Harry, so extremely believable. And the friendship and sense of family between everyone else was such a joy to read. I can\'t wait for more, please write fast. Big hugs

Kat
person Serpenteyes
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now we\'re gettin\' somewhere! Just keep writing long fics, you\'re good at it.
person woof
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arrggghhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! nonononononononononononono!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Bree
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOD! MERLIN! This is a wonderful story...I can\'t....*Tries to breathe* So hot....so....very.....hot....if I was a guy, I\'d need a really cold shower.