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for Laying the Blame

by ksevfansd

person dragon34
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes, it would definately be lucius\'s fault, if anyone daydreamed about him doing naughty things to them. if draco was my husband, i would have to do just about everything to get him to do really naughty things, probably shag his father in front of him, so he would definately get some kind of message. tell him to watch and learn. do you plan to make this a longer story ? because i would love to see if hermione acts out her fantasy.
person scifichick774
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent beginning. I feel just awful for Hermione, but something tells me I won\'t for long. ;) More soon please.
person Inell
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I love Draco/Hermione and I love Lucius/Hermione so this is a two for one! I\'m eager to read more.

Inell
person mary
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!