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for Laying the Blame

by ksevfansd

person LaLa
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love HG and LM together. I hope you continue soon
person phoenixangel7
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t tell you enough how much I love this story! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person jet
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pls pls pls rite more!!!!!! i luv hg/lm fiks, i dnt fink theres enough of them out there!! so pls put me out of my pain nd rite another chapter or 2 4 dis sik nd twisted gurl!!
person scifichick774
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooops. Hee! No wonder Lucius had to find Draco a wife. Looking forward to more of this.
person laceyweasley
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco is so busted!
person Marie
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear God! Your stories are incredible!!! I love all of them! Anyway, again, please keep up the amazing work!!
person dragon34
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m confused, did i miss something in the first chapter? how did harry come into the picture ?
person Josh Cohen
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The twist at the end of the second chapter is excellent, although upon further reflection, I suppose I shouldn\'t have been too terribly surprised.

The characterizations of Lucius and Hermione are quite good. I would like, in further chapters, to know just how the two of them ended up together beyond \"he needed a wife and she was ready to get married\". There\'s got to be more to it than that.
person anon
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far--intriguing approach to an often-neglected pairing! Carry on! :)
person xena
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m all for Hermione with Draco AND Lucius! Let\'s get it on!!!!