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for Laying the Blame

by ksevfansd

person CoCoM
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh he is soooo naughty! *giggles* I love it!
It's like, uh hello-all of my fantasies include you, Lucius! Yum.
person Lackey
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'd love to see more of this! The power plays make it pretty exciting and very sexy!
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 2

OMG, LOL, where the fuck did that come from? She finally gets the passion she has been dying for from her hubby and she shouts out Harry's name? At least she didn't scream out, "Oh God, Lucius!"

Hmmm, interesting.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 3

OMG, *WEG* silly me, I didn't see that twist (D/H) coming. *snicker* At least she got a taste of passion from Draco (finally), even though he screamed out Harry's while give her a good rogering, LOL.

What a scheming, conniving bastard Lucius was to insist that Draco would only be allowed to marry Hermione.
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schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 5
My what a deliciously wicked tease Lucius is to Hermione.
;D
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 6
What a dick! He gets her all worked up, takes time out to give her a trinket (like she gives a black rat's arse about it) like she is a concubine/mistress to be placated with such things, and then the final insult to be dismissed and told to go to her hubby.
:/

Well written, even if I am frustrated for (along with) Hermione.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 1

'The older Malfoy exuded sexuality and while that frightened her a bit, it also excited her. If Draco had even one ounce of that vitality, she knew she could be a happy girl indeed.

Lucius convinced her to meet with Draco. That was all it took. Hermione had been if not in love, definitely in lust with her future husband. What more did she need?'
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'That was what Draco lacked. Passion. It was if he was playing quidditch. No, that was not true. He showed more passion when he was playing quidditch.'
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'He was able to perform his husbandly duties but he lacked any emotion while doing it.

Hermione even resorted to violence. ... She wanted him to feel something. ... Draco wasn
person iita09
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is wonderful story! I really wish you could update soon!
person Reviewer
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story....I wish you would update =)