AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I think I feel like an even bigger pervert for enjoying every moment of this. Its really well written and definitely got the loint across. But damn! That was a hot piece overall and I've not read one quite like this before. Thank you for a good story
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is sick and twisted and demented and... perfect.
person Smuff
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really a well planned smut fic. It had purpose and the sex scenes were written really well! I loved the growing tension, the UST and Harry's desperation. I love u for using dirty talking because that sends me utterly nuts and u were superb with it. The whole idea, I loved. I can totaly see Severus been so cruel and possessive. It was really sexy, it turned me on! lol! Kudooosss!
person TifLaw
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was really original... at least to me. Thought you did an excellent job. Damn I feel sorry for Harry, Snape's just added himself to Harry's list of opressors, hasn't he? Stupid Sanpe and his plans. Oh well, Blue was an excelleny character by the way. Good story :)
person 8inchCaliper
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! i really enjoyed this! Very very well written and deep...a little depressing at the end, but awesome overall...

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person Kit
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freakin\' god...

That was hot