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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a brilliant story! could you please post the next chapter a.s.a.p!
thanx
thanx
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. You write it in a way that makes it seem very innocent and cute, not unlike the books.
i hate to be anal, but i could not help but notice a couple spelling and grammatical mistakes. Perhaps you should consider having somebody read it before posting, it\'s up to you. If you cant find anybody, i guess i could do it, but i dont know that i would do that great of a job, seeing as how ive never written anything on here myself, only considered it and brushed it off. smutkop@ncssm.edu
and please keep writing, its great!
i hate to be anal, but i could not help but notice a couple spelling and grammatical mistakes. Perhaps you should consider having somebody read it before posting, it\'s up to you. If you cant find anybody, i guess i could do it, but i dont know that i would do that great of a job, seeing as how ive never written anything on here myself, only considered it and brushed it off. smutkop@ncssm.edu
and please keep writing, its great!
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I think this story is so cute. The twins have always been my favorite supporting characters. They\'re just so goddamn adorable. Keep up the story. I\'m liking this one.... GOOD JOB. Can\'t wait till the next chapter....
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this... :)
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December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yea !!!!!!!!!!!! they kissed. ron better be happy for them, if he\'s not then he needs his ass kicked
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think it\'s cute. a shy fred, if that\'s even possible to imagine. i can\'t wait to read about their first kiss. it\'s a sweet story, i hope you continue, and update as much as possible.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love Fred...
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it ! it\'s very rare anyone puts the twins with anyone else besides the girls on the quidditch team. please keep going.