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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. Gotta love any fan fic writer who used the word \"calumny\" correctly, as you did, or at all! Aside from that, I do feel Draco and Harry are falling for each other a bit fast. Otherwise I am enjoying your story very much. Thank you.
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All in all, this is a pretty good story. The only thing I have problems with is the OOC-ness. Especially on Snape\'s part. And if you\'ll remember, Snape is Draco\'s Godfather, he would naturally be a bit more caring to the boy. And since Snape would never get over Harry\'s father\'s transgressions, I doubt very much that he would allow himself to fall in love with one of Potter\'s friends. I also think you\'re being too harsh on Dumbledore, yes he always had his own agenda Harry was expected to play by, but he is in a war and has to take the necessary precautions. Everything that Dumbledore has ever done was in Harry\'s best interest. And HELLO?! Ron and Hermione not together?! I understand that this is AU, obviously enough, but still, seeing as you would want to keep in line with the real books, I\'d expect that you follow the same rules. You\'ll aslo do well to note that the Sorting Hat only wanted to put Harry in Slytherin because Voldemort had left an imprint on the boy of his own dark personality. In the books, the wizards also did in fact celebrate Christmas and not Yule, though I might be confused on what Yule is exactly, there were no mention of Gods or the like.
Overall, it is a good fict. though, and I wait for your next update.
Your American Brethren,
-Dom
Overall, it is a good fict. though, and I wait for your next update.
Your American Brethren,
-Dom
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I do so love this story! You make me laugh, cry, scream and so many other emotions. Fantastic work!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I love it so far! Definately keep writing! Awesome job! ^.^
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely wonderful
hope you update soon
hope you update soon
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a review to say how much I\'m enjoying this story, and just to clear something up \'knocked up\' in the UK either means getting someone pregnant which I believe it also means in the US, or being woken up from your bed to answer the door.
I also have a question why do some US fanfic writers say \'Bullocks\' instead of \'Bollocks\', does it have something to do with the way HP is printed over there? As a Brit myself it is something I\'ve been curious about for a while, no one\'s answered me yet though...
I also have a question why do some US fanfic writers say \'Bullocks\' instead of \'Bollocks\', does it have something to do with the way HP is printed over there? As a Brit myself it is something I\'ve been curious about for a while, no one\'s answered me yet though...
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapie. update soon again.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not that they don\'t deserve it... but did the Dursleys ever get woken up? Good story by the way!