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for Bound!

by Draeconin

person morgan le fay
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
Just a genetic note. I don\'t know if you wanted wizarding genetics to be different then muggle (us), but, since a man only needs one Y chromosome to be male that means that each man also carries an X chromosome therefore it is possible when combinging two sets of Male chromosomes that the two X chromosomes would be combined creating a female fetus, although it is slightly more likely to get a male... I think. Two females could not have anything but a girl. They have also been doing female/female tests with mice in china. I think they got two viable (able to produce offspring) mice out of about 4,500 test pregnancies or maybe 45,000.
Anyhow, Love the story, I am just a total genetics geek as well.
person Ozymandias
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was an incredibly good read. I loved how Harry and Draco got together and Draco got knocked up so easily lol. It was fantastic, i hope you write more fanfics like this one!
person Anonx
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this and am reading greedily as fast as possible. :D I *really* like it. However....

\"Only in magical terms, Mr. Malfoy,\" the headmaster interjected. \"I\'m sure what Professor Snape meant was that you are in a magically induced relationship akin to being wed, and you, Draco, hold the less prominent position due to the bonding ritual\'s original intent - hence, \'wife.\'\" Turning to the greasy-locked man, he queried \"Isn\'t that correct, Severus?\"

I\'m NOT crazy about the commentary that the wife is the \'less prominent\' position in a marriage. Granted societally/socially this may be the general impression. However, I seriously doubt that is the case spiritually or \'magically\'. Now as Snape is such a prick (although oddly loveable one), I\'d let slide his commentary. But really I expected better from Dumbledore. :P
person smurf
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! yes! good ending. I agree that the voldemort thing WAS rather anticlimatic but it fit in well with the fic. I\'m so sad that you\'re done! You should write another one about bonding :D

please?
person Priss368
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked ending! I had to laugh at that. Narcissa is one clever grandma! Poor Draco! Priss
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh lovie! That was fantastic! I loved it! You had me scared there for a bit but you ended this perfectly! Though I\'m sooo very sad to see it end!
person ura
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful story! A kind of sad that it\'s ended. I had a lot of fun reading it and waiting for updates. Thank you so much!
person Remus\'s Girl
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHEHEHEHEHEHE Great ending with Narcissa! I really enjoyed this story! You are not the first person to have an \'anticlimactic\' vold\'y death makes you wonder wha the actualy one in the book will be like huh
person Morgan LeFay
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read the final chapter----fantastic!!! Will there be a possible sequel? I will let you know when I have finished the fanart for this.

morgan
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow *grins madly* Fabulous...are u thinking of doing any epilogues? Just to keep us updated on the children? I\'m a sucker for fluff.