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December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellant story and I love the ending
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little toogay- it seemed out of charachter for the main charachters although. I loved the beginning it certainly reeled me in- Good job overall.
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work, most impressive. I won\'t beg for more chapters, but if you wanted to go back to this particular story, moving the time line a few years, that might be fun. We also didn\'t see much of Sev and Remus. I\'d love to see Draco try to deal with a tantrum from a 2 year old. Voldemort in dead, but there are other fish to fry. After all, Light of Heaven is complete too.
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh yeah the story was great! Thanks for finishing and tieing up the loose ends, i really enjoyed it!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee.. I love it. The secret that will be around for 12 years before you send it to school...
Hmmm.. what could THAT be, I wonder? :) Yay Hermione!
Hmmm.. what could THAT be, I wonder? :) Yay Hermione!
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just pointing out the fact that mourning sickness is not actualy something that happens in the mourning, it happens all day long. just thought you should know.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Realizing that I\'m late come to this, I suppose you dont\' need a review for each and every blamed chapter. So I\'ll try and keep them small and unobtrusive (and ignore the snickering gnomes in the background. The know NOTHING!)
Anyway.. *g* Tickled at that! \"\"How do you think he got such good marks in Potions? - EW! No!\" Hee hee. Very cute! You didn\'t even have to state it, yet what a cute slide in joke to the HP/SS community (of which I am one!)
I\'m only half way through chapter one, but already it\'s proving to be a delight and I can\'t wait to read more!
Anyway.. *g* Tickled at that! \"\"How do you think he got such good marks in Potions? - EW! No!\" Hee hee. Very cute! You didn\'t even have to state it, yet what a cute slide in joke to the HP/SS community (of which I am one!)
I\'m only half way through chapter one, but already it\'s proving to be a delight and I can\'t wait to read more!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Congrats Mr. Malfoy! Or rather.. Mrs Malfoy! Err... wait.. what?
I love it! :) Cute!
And I\'m out of time. Gotta stop there. *pout* Can\'t wait to continue later!
I love it! :) Cute!
And I\'m out of time. Gotta stop there. *pout* Can\'t wait to continue later!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! what an incredible story! i absolutely loved it! you are a very good writer--the story flowed so well, your descriptions were vivid and your characterizations were spot-on. there are so many good stories on this site--plot-wise that is--but few are so well-written. it does make a huge difference. i am sure your betas helped out but you obviously have natural talent. thanks for sharing with us! now i look forward to reading more of your work!