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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story!! I loved the ending
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i had a feeling of twins and them being in the vision. though it would be nice to see the sequel-and who knows maybe they wont destroy it because of...whatever-the two love spells, the patricide, or what not.
though, i do believe twins are usually born at 8months, tripliets arent but twins are always early.
but, really, id like to see what happens.
good story. thanks. and its a good thing you recomended your self.
though, i do believe twins are usually born at 8months, tripliets arent but twins are always early.
but, really, id like to see what happens.
good story. thanks. and its a good thing you recomended your self.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Elwyn,
I love this fic! Clever story line and the ending was unexpected. I\'m glad you\'ve introduced us to your work in the community. Hope you\'ll write more.
C.C.
I love this fic! Clever story line and the ending was unexpected. I\'m glad you\'ve introduced us to your work in the community. Hope you\'ll write more.
C.C.
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really like it.i think it just might be my favorite story so far.i love the twist at the end.you should totally right a sequal!
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December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was brilliant!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, I was NOT expecting that ending. But I loved it, nonetheless. I have to say, through parts of it, I was thinking that it was very fluffy, and very OOC, but towards the end I got really into it. Good job =)
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh you got to write a sequil to this story. I just love it. excilent story.
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg... I\'m gonna cry... That was such a great story and such a CRAZY twist!!! I\'m seriously crying right now. That was well written and I hope it doesn\'t turn out true!!
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story, a true master of twisting plots. i couldn\'t believe you would have the patients to type all that in one sitting. i can\'t wait to see more from you, keep it up.
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was such a great story! I loved how you made it seem like everything was going to be okay and then spring the end on us, masterfully done! I hope that you continue to write stories, you are very good.
~Ruth
~Ruth