rate_review Reviews

uh.... I think I'm gonna have to ask the same thing that the first person asked and that would be... you ok? I'm not sure who's worse, you for writing this or the people who reviewed and liked it.

I think you need to figure out what Smut is and what fanfiction is before you try writing again... that and seek some help... there's no point to this story.

Also none of the men you have in here ever raped anyone, and if they did in your world, maybe you should explain that.

And on a final note, who the hell is Jessica? Because it's either a realyl bad Original Chacter, or a really really bad mary sue... grow up and get a life before you write more.

This is what men have got coming to them? I'm so happy I'm not a man. I'm never one to judge, but that was unnecessaraly violent; what's the point in killing them? I don't see how you can break each toe individually with a baseball bat, maybe you should elaborate. You did not explain how the men got there, did they just wake up and then BAM they're there? Anyway...it's extremely pointless, and retarded in my opinion. You just have too much time to waste -_-'

You know you used the f-word 11 times? And I think it was only used once in regards to the actual act. Other then the excessive language, I noticed a lack of explination as to why you are assalting them with pointy and blunt objects. You remind me of Faith from Buffy the Vampire Slayer right before she broke down and went to jail. Anyway, I love Malfoys being raped as much as the next person I\'m sure, but why? Inquiring minds want to know!

lol

WESTSIDE!!! Yeah bitch, Whoot Whoot, hump hump!

Hey another well thought out marysue! Though granted its a little different from the norm.
I get you\'re angry, i don\'t get why. Care to privide an explanation?
I disagree with Anon though (nice way to review by the way, not having the courage to leave a name or email address)
Men do not want to be raped, thats a sweeping generalisation. And of course men can be raped, theres no reason they can\'t be forced against their will.

Read a few words. This is stupid, you don\'t explain anything. (like how they\'re there. At least I don\'t think you do - it made me too sick to read after a point) The characters aren\'t even in character, you don\'t explain yourself, and sheesh, wtf you can\'t rape a guy. Most guys want it unless you buttfuck them which I can see you\'re doing but still... it sucks. Just delete it.

Uhhhh...........You okay there buddy? Normally I don\'t judge self-expression, but...I\'ve never read a story where some strange chick rapes men, forces them to eat pig cum, then beat them to death. I only have a few questions. 1)Who the hell is Jessica? 2)Who did all the HP dudes rape? and 3)Did you write this in a state of boiled up rage against the male species? Just curious.