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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Real fun, update soon please
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Real nice storie, why not the Patil Twins together??
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea, please update. It\'s got lots of potential, but the grammar and spelling kind of bother. If you put a little more work into this, there\'s no telling how hot it could be.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some awkward dialogue but it was all good. Gotta fight all those damn slash fics out there... *shudders*
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January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
doing great so far keep writing update soon.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story it\'s interesting but you have to improve the way you make descriptions
If you look in the second page of the Harry Potter fanfiction you can see the new chapters or stories, don\'t ask me why because i don\'t know, i found it because i was looking for older fics
If you look in the second page of the Harry Potter fanfiction you can see the new chapters or stories, don\'t ask me why because i don\'t know, i found it because i was looking for older fics