AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Why?

by Pearle

person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person LookFar
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, well written. I wish you would expand this. I assume that there\'s more to the \"why\" than the boredom of being married to Ron? Maybe a surprised punchline from Hermione would be good. Thanks!
person eve/roarke
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your one off, very well writen and potent.
person Angie
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent one shot! Very well written. It\'s begging for a sequel.
person lovesrainscent
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite good.
person minime
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This can
person cearrae27
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love all your stories.
That being said, I think this plot could be fleshed out in a sequal. Please consider. I find there are fewer stories well written on any of the fan sites these days than before. I have offered to beta two writers but I think I scared one off. Apparrently planning a story longer than 2 or 3 chapters stifles creative thought - who knew.
Keep on writing.Thanks

Linda