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for Edge Of Gravity

by Agora

person June
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 28 - poor Luna, so many choices to make and she was paralyzed with shock and indecision. Not sure who found her in the end - Pince? Another student? Thanks for updating!
person June
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 26-27 - omigosh, I hope Ron has just been Imperio\'d, so he can be un-Imperio\'d. Please let Dobby be found by good guys! Thanks for the new chapters.
person June W
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 25 - Mum? Hermione\'s Mum? Wow, that\'ll be nice to see, a friendly familiar face. Umm, any chance of rescuing poor little Dobby sometime soon? THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
person June W
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - scary! I thought that white one was going to knock Severus unconscious or something. So Severus still doesn\'t know Harry is alive, and Dobby is on the loose trying to find Severus? Please hurry - don\'t let Dobby get caught by Lucius! Thanks for updating.
person June W
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 23 - I sure hope Lucius gets killed for what he did to Winky, Dobby, and his other victims. Kill Lucius! Thanks for updating.
person Page
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update soon!
person moirasfate (not logged in)
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I am really enjoying this fic, however I cannot help but be a little bit confused by the timeline. I would think that the strange timeline is intentional and can only hope everything will come together soon. The writing is smooth, almost seamless, which I greatly thank you for...and your beta.

Just basically wanted to give my regards and hope to see a new chapter soon.

m.fate
person Wizarding Angel
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truly love this story. It is wondrfully writen and the charators are also to. as allways keep up wti the excellent work.
person June
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 22 - oh no, please don\'t tell me you killed off Dobby! I\'m glad Luna is getting out and was smart enough to use the crystals on the bad guys, but I am partial to your sweet Dobby. And Severus. And Hermione. And the other characters you\'ve brought to life in this story! Thanks for the new chapter.
person sbkar
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You seduce me with this story and what??!??!?! Where\'s the rest?!?!? I\'m dyin\' here!!!!