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for The Given Choices

by JesstinaMalfoy

person Ashley
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story i cant wait for more.....the fact that mrs malfoy wants draco to be on the light side makes this the most amazing story i have read please write more soon....i think ill die if u dont lol!!!
person KittyWolf
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty cool story. Keep it up. :D
person Avanell
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I only got to skim, as I\'m getting ready to perform in a ballet tonight...but what I could tell I loved it! Mrs. Malfoy rocks! In a twisted way, of course! Love how both her and her cousin talked about choices and such. Now, just get to some more lemons, please...along with the plot. after all, this IS the adult fanfiction site :)

This is truly one of my favorite stories!
person Kenzie_trinity
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good. Too good. More, must have more. Soon!!!!
person dragon34
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait to read more, update soon.
person JMarie
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! There\'s not enough stories out with romances that take time to develop.
person trixrstrange
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One can never have TOO much fluff in a story. Quote me on that damnit. Fluff is always good. Builds plot and character along with the emotional attatchments we all love to see. And Shakespeare quoted through there.... brilliant. Can\'t wait to read more chapters!

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^
person Narcissa Black
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good use of the Master in this chapter. I was at Oxford several years ago for a summer seminar, and there was this one guy who went on and on about how Shakespeare couldn\'t have written all the plays, yadda, yadda, yadda. Finally, the prof (who was in his late seventies and very distinguished) had enough, and just said, \"He wrote the fucking plays.\" Classic.
person Avanell
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goodness, I have been enjoying all the wonderful updates...this is definitely one of my fav\'s. Loved Bellatrix explaining to her daughter (just perfectly what I had hoped...she discovered who her daughter was and didn\'t know before) to Draco\'s sending of the flowers. The interlude in the tub was a nice touch...they didn\'t go overboard and still hinted at each other. can\'t wait for what your muse guides you to write next!
person Avanell
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PS: I\'m a professor I don\'t pay attention to any grammer errors...I love this story too much. And yes, they do bug me in others. Your writing weaves and carries through enough for me. I\'m sure I\'ve seen a few errors, but dismiss them. Don\'t let anonymous slow you down!

Also, is the second aunt more like a first cousin once removed? In other words, draco\'s mother\'s first cousin would be his first cousin once removed. their children would be his second cousins. is that how you mean it? Er, is that how the magic world defines it in your story (there...that was a nicer statement :)