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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

person lilil
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First i hope you kid get well soon, Mine was not good also, Probably the weather change. Okie done for kids life :P:P

I love this Chap. Everything about it was so right, Especially the scene btw draco and hermione! (Not only because of the delectable smut, but overall) the story is just lovely! I really want to know what going to happen in the pre-office! Poor pan!


Thanks for your nice chap, Until next one :):)
person Excel
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really one of the best Draco/Hermione fanfics I can honestly say I\'ve read in a while. Definitely not predicable or boring in the least...thankgoodness. And most of all, I got to reread this all over again. Lol.
person min
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know what happens next!!! You are da bomb~ No need for cliffies for you, we\'ll all keep coming back for more even if you stopped writing for months! Not that I want you to do that!!!!
person Pinkpig
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Egads! Another update - and only one day after I read the last one! This must be what heaven feels like ... I haven\'t died, have I? I must admit that I check your fic for updates on a daily basis (heh - I have a life, I swear!) and I wasn\'t really expecting one today - but apparently someone loves me because looky-here! An update! Well color me blissful. It was quite excellent, as usual. I\'m glad this whole Pansy buisness is being addressed and the small snipit of smut was a wonderfully delicious morsle. (Library - beautiful! I wont be able to go in one again without thinking naughty thoughts...) I jsut want to implore you once again to update as I cannot get enough of this.

I hope everything went alright with your daughter and everything is ok!
person semperputus
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I really do and I hope there is lots more to come. Draco in jeans lovely. I also like the developments with Snape and hope Pansy gets what is coming to her. You have kept Blaise on the fence and I love it You have made him so intresting. Thankyou for reloading this to Aff I would hate to lose it now as it just gets better and better but I pray for a happy ending I\'m a sucker for fluff. I also say thanks for for making Goyle and Crabbe sweet so many stories have them as mindless baboons and I think they could be so much more. Can\'t wait for next chapter
person Rei
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you daughter is alright and I\'m glad that you, personally, did not lose all your 300+ reviews. This story is fabulous and I can hardly wait to see what the outcome will be.
person MsLessa
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seeing an update to Pansy\'s Volcano always brings a huge smile to my face. I love all the intricate twists and turns this story takes. The buildup is phenomenal. I hope your daughter is doing better, especially since I\'m a greedy witch who wants more of this story and knows how RL can intrude on the muses.
person Bec
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its back! Its back! HAPPINESS!

Keep writing and I\'ll keep reading.
person Cinn
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Freaking yay!!! I was soooooo happy to read at the Leather Librarians thread that you had updated today!!! I was hoping that we would get to see the blow up between Draco and Pansy in this chapter, but all that sexual tension was enough to tide me over until the next chapter, I guess, lol. These two are driving themselves, along with me, crazy over keeping their secret so well. And how fun for Ginny to have a front row seat to the show, lol. Greatness once again. Also, I\'m glad things are going well with your daughter now. You\'re both in my thoughts and prayers. Can hardly wait for the next chapter, but I will try to go on... :)
person Kylara
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My best wishes for your daughter\'s health - I can\'t imagine how nerve wracking that must have been. Your readers greatly appreciate the new chapters (as I will get into in a moment), but we know where your priorities are :> never fear, we\'ll always wait.

Your story is wonderful. Draco in tight denim! Glory, glory, the saints wept. I\'m a bit curious, however; what does \"He dresses to the right\" mean? ^^; You don\'t need to answer if I\'m being an ignorant idiot, as I\'m just curious ^^

The tension between Draco and Hermione is just as strong as it was *before* they had sex. I\'m very glad - it keeps such an emotionally charged atmosphere going on. I also like how now that things have setteld down a bit, the characters are acting just as I expect they would.

Very nice touch on the Gryffindor portrait and Hermione\'s realization of why he might be irked :P I\'m sure he\'s seen worse, though - generations of hormonal head boys and girls >.> I wonder, does he gossip to the other portraits? Heh.

I felt that the story was losing some pace in a couple of the previous chapters, but you\'ve gotten back on target with this delightful part. The final preparations for the ball and Draco and Hermione\'s private interludes are pushing it along quite nicely - never let it be said that you don\'t entertain your readers with high quality fic. Thanks for the chapter, and until next time :>