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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH16
Well, that whole chapter was nice and fun. I think kissing with your eyes open and establishing visual contact is one of the sexiest things you can do during a make out session, nice of you to put it in there! (fans self). Hermione is still determined to resist Draco, even after that wonderfully convincing attempt on his part, all because of Ron. The boy has got to go. And I wonder what the two love birds are going to do when they find out they are going to be partnered together. Constantly. Should be fun!
Well, that whole chapter was nice and fun. I think kissing with your eyes open and establishing visual contact is one of the sexiest things you can do during a make out session, nice of you to put it in there! (fans self). Hermione is still determined to resist Draco, even after that wonderfully convincing attempt on his part, all because of Ron. The boy has got to go. And I wonder what the two love birds are going to do when they find out they are going to be partnered together. Constantly. Should be fun!
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH17
Hmm, though I want Hermione to ditch Ron for the sake of this story, her breaking up with him will certainly not make it easier for her to resist Draco. The girl is a genius in every area but love it seems. I\'m glad she had the moxy to kiss Draco and catch him off guard. You\'re turning her into a complex, enjoyable character. And I know Draco has an inherent dislike for most things Gryffindor, so it\'s hilarious that he\'s gotten off in the Gryffindor stands and under them now like some kind of sexual christening or sacrifice.
Hmm, though I want Hermione to ditch Ron for the sake of this story, her breaking up with him will certainly not make it easier for her to resist Draco. The girl is a genius in every area but love it seems. I\'m glad she had the moxy to kiss Draco and catch him off guard. You\'re turning her into a complex, enjoyable character. And I know Draco has an inherent dislike for most things Gryffindor, so it\'s hilarious that he\'s gotten off in the Gryffindor stands and under them now like some kind of sexual christening or sacrifice.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah and the story continues. I really must compliment you on updating so quickly and more important I can\'t wait until we reach the end of this fine tale.
Rock on!
Slytherinswn
Rock on!
Slytherinswn
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH18
Ah, I had a feeling Draco would help his team win. Something about the euphoria of love and all that, turns a guy into Superman. It was cute how Hermione oggled him when she shold have been worrying about her team, the girl is definitely hooked. It was also sweet how Draco knew exactly where she was the entire time and didn\'t even bother hiding the fact that he was looking at her. He\'s got it just as bad, I suspect maybe worse, considering he seems to have banned the singing of the Weasel is Our King. The only down side is now Hermione is worried about hurting Ron\'s feelings, kicking him while he\'s down so to speak. I hope their breakup doesn\'t ruin all the friendships. Maybe Luna can sweep in and Hermione can graciously bow out?
Ah, I had a feeling Draco would help his team win. Something about the euphoria of love and all that, turns a guy into Superman. It was cute how Hermione oggled him when she shold have been worrying about her team, the girl is definitely hooked. It was also sweet how Draco knew exactly where she was the entire time and didn\'t even bother hiding the fact that he was looking at her. He\'s got it just as bad, I suspect maybe worse, considering he seems to have banned the singing of the Weasel is Our King. The only down side is now Hermione is worried about hurting Ron\'s feelings, kicking him while he\'s down so to speak. I hope their breakup doesn\'t ruin all the friendships. Maybe Luna can sweep in and Hermione can graciously bow out?
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH19
First I would like to address the note at the bottom of this chapter. This story is going amazingly well, there are few stories that can hold a reader\'s interest for more then a dozen chapters, but so far this one hasn\'t grown the least bit dull. So no, I don\'t think you are dragging the story out. You have remarkable talent for combining humor, sexual tension and anticipation, take all the time you want! Now, I have to say Draco has definitely fallen under Hermione\'s feet, to feel like he\'s cheating on her when they aren\'t even together! And to leave the party so he could be alone rather then with anyone else. (sighs and swoons). So romantic. I\'m glad Crookshanks likes him, I think that\'ll boost him in her eyes some. Gotta love a man that animals like, after all. But I can\'t believe he told her he was seeing someone, I mean I know he\'s just trying to make himself seem less threatening, but that might make Hermione back off...or drive her mad with jealousy. Brilliant.
First I would like to address the note at the bottom of this chapter. This story is going amazingly well, there are few stories that can hold a reader\'s interest for more then a dozen chapters, but so far this one hasn\'t grown the least bit dull. So no, I don\'t think you are dragging the story out. You have remarkable talent for combining humor, sexual tension and anticipation, take all the time you want! Now, I have to say Draco has definitely fallen under Hermione\'s feet, to feel like he\'s cheating on her when they aren\'t even together! And to leave the party so he could be alone rather then with anyone else. (sighs and swoons). So romantic. I\'m glad Crookshanks likes him, I think that\'ll boost him in her eyes some. Gotta love a man that animals like, after all. But I can\'t believe he told her he was seeing someone, I mean I know he\'s just trying to make himself seem less threatening, but that might make Hermione back off...or drive her mad with jealousy. Brilliant.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is a fantastic story. I started reading it before the crash and was so pissed when I couldn\'t finish reading what had been posted! It must have taken quite a while to repost it all (very glad that you did!). I loved the line - \"Oh, Lord - he
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH20
Ah, and so Hermione makes her move and dumps Ron. The blurt method never fails! I feel bad for Ron, he\'s a nice enough guy, but it was good of Hermione to let him down by blaming everything on a busy schedule, even if she did lie. I find it interesting she thinks of going to bed with Draco as having sex and he thinks of it as making love, a role reversal and quite refreshing! I can\'t wait to see what Ginny has to say to Hermione...and if Draco will be able to find out Ron is history.
Ah, and so Hermione makes her move and dumps Ron. The blurt method never fails! I feel bad for Ron, he\'s a nice enough guy, but it was good of Hermione to let him down by blaming everything on a busy schedule, even if she did lie. I find it interesting she thinks of going to bed with Draco as having sex and he thinks of it as making love, a role reversal and quite refreshing! I can\'t wait to see what Ginny has to say to Hermione...and if Draco will be able to find out Ron is history.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(33) i guess since aff is up and runnning i would at least leave a few bits from the previous chaps.
i was dying when i had read draco overhearing pansy coming on to snape. esp with what snape had said and draco\'s reaction to it and his knowing what snape\'s was as well.
man that was great.
and nice that pansy has still placed granger on the bottom of her suspect list.
and then of course her telling neveille that she is just as clueless as he.
i was dying when i had read draco overhearing pansy coming on to snape. esp with what snape had said and draco\'s reaction to it and his knowing what snape\'s was as well.
man that was great.
and nice that pansy has still placed granger on the bottom of her suspect list.
and then of course her telling neveille that she is just as clueless as he.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yes how i loved this chapter.
\"Snape nodded once, seemingly oddly pleased with the answer.\"
snape can be so cute sometimes. though is he in so much denial of what dumbledore said about the two and he only beleives in the 2 dimensional in front of his eyes? esp sine he thinks he can lord it over AD and say that albus was wrong about who draco was with?
oh and of course the bit with:\"his heart took another unplanned leap up into his throat, so that he had to stare very hard at the desk to prevent anyone else seeing the foolish smile which spread across his features.\" was adorable too.
though they werent the slytherins to reign supreme in the cute contest. vince and greg beat them both by far. that whole scene between the three of them.
from the way it started \"Greg nodded and after casting a quick glance around to check that they were alone he lowered his voice to a whisper as Vincent had done so recently and confided to Draco.
\"Snape nodded once, seemingly oddly pleased with the answer.\"
snape can be so cute sometimes. though is he in so much denial of what dumbledore said about the two and he only beleives in the 2 dimensional in front of his eyes? esp sine he thinks he can lord it over AD and say that albus was wrong about who draco was with?
oh and of course the bit with:\"his heart took another unplanned leap up into his throat, so that he had to stare very hard at the desk to prevent anyone else seeing the foolish smile which spread across his features.\" was adorable too.
though they werent the slytherins to reign supreme in the cute contest. vince and greg beat them both by far. that whole scene between the three of them.
from the way it started \"Greg nodded and after casting a quick glance around to check that they were alone he lowered his voice to a whisper as Vincent had done so recently and confided to Draco.