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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

person dracosbitch
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh, thankyou so much for updating, i look forward to more!!!
person eve/roarke
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, Dumbledore at his best, and Draco and Hermione perfect together.
Please update soon.
person lilil
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sexy Sexy!
person dracosbitch
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story, i have been gripped from the start, keep up the great work
person Akasha
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best draco/hermione fic I have read. I haven\'t been in the \'ship long (about 6 months), but I\'m an avid reader. Yours I have been following since the summertime and I can\'t believe how much I love it. I read the earlier not about a hospital trip but I wasn\'t aware of the details. I\'m so sorry that your daughter fell ill and I hope she\'s getting better! I nearly had a coronary when I could no longer find this. Today I finally began snooping around and found it again! With two more chapters, no less! I was ecstatic and I think it\'s getting better and better. Thank you so much for writing such a clever and well-written piece of fiction. It\'s so steamy that I had to look away a couple of times to get the blush from my cheeks to go down! Partway through I started giggling like a little schoolgirl! You\'re an inspiration to a fellow (poor, amateur) writer who only wishes she could write such lovely words as you can! Thank you a million times again and I cannot wait until the next update! Hurry soon!
person Lara
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such an excellent fic!
I love everything about it from the characters to the plot.
I love the sexual tension between D and Hr. You wrote it so tangible for the 20 odd chapters before they actually got any action that I could have burst into flames just from the foreplay. Oh, your Draco is killer!

Great work and I look forward to subsequent chapters.
And I hope the RL is treating you ok. I saw mention of ambulances, hospitals and kids so here\'s hoping that everything is well.
If you\'re interested, I pimped you a little on my LJ: http://www.livejournal.com/users/little_miss_lk/51652.html
Feel free to come by and check it out because there\'s more feedback for your fic there!
person Lulu
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that although I am no expert ;) your story is written very well! I can also say that your writing style imitates JKR\'s very nicely, but I like focussing on the social aspects of hogwarts more than the Voldemort stuff and Harry. Excellent storyline and good character development and nicely intertwined stories.
person flynn
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really love this story. I just reread the entire thing for the third time (and have read some of the more...exciting chapters several more times). anyway, you have a great fic and i\'m getting all antsy in my pantsy to see what will happen next!^_^
person k9artisan
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hooo! I can\'t wait for more! This has to be one of the best stories on the net and the sex scenes are just yummy! Great job!
~k9artsan
person Kristina Malfoy
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m so glad I decided to come back and check for your story. I was looking for it during/ right after the site collapse but I couldn\'t find it anywhere! Thanks so much for reposting it so promptly. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!