rate_review Reviews

ohhhh ... Lucious is geting a parole? Hmmm... interseting. I really loved teh scene with Draco and Hermione. It was nic eto see them talk in this chapter (even more then that last) It\'s just so hopeful to see that they can have a conversation and don\'t jsut shag all the time (well, they do shag all the time bu tyou know what I mean.) And I was so excited when Hermione felt a little jealouse of mandy borkcleherst (jealousy was the \"twinge of \'something\'\", right?) I love the way you describe teh passion between Draco and Hermione. Keep going and update as soon as you can! I wish the scene with Draco and Hermionie had never ended...but I also want to know who Snape\'s lover is. The bit form his pov, btw, was really well done. It was incredibly Snape-like.

WOW. My goodness, way to throw in not only Dumbledore\'s intentions, but a potential huge .. words escape me, but whatever Lucius can do, it will surely be bad. I\'m amazed :O

Snape = funny in his ignorance. And I particularly like how he showed up outside the doors - that\'s a very Snape thing to do.

Draco & Hermione = :> Aww, they\'re so amusing. And Hermione\'s getting jealous, which probably balances things a little since she has Anthony hitting on her.

Enjoyed this chapter a lot, will wait until the next. :)

WOW! This has got to be one of the BEST stories I have ever read, published or otherwise. I mean... wow... great!

Just Keep writing and I\'ll keep reviewing. I loved the conversation between the teachers, I just grinned through the whole thing. Great work.

Another great chapter! Hoping you will get a few more chapters in before christmas! I love the interaction between Dumbledore and Snape... It\'s always good to see Snape on edge. UPDATE SOON!

Excellent chapter... the foundations of Hermione and Draco\'s relationship along with the plot driven device of Lucius looming in the background have elevated the external tension of this story. I can hardly wait for the weekend and dinner conversation.

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Oh well I was simply, er *enjoying*? the tale right up until the last sentence. Oh. My. God. Lucius being parolled? No, no, no, no, NO. Okay I\'ll admit I was wondering what other spanners you were going to throw into their path but I never even guessed at that. Evil and - oh *alright* - very clever. I mean really, what better test to Draco\'s feelings on both the war and Hermione could there be? I think it\'s safe to say that I\'m really enjoying this story. Thanks for updating again so soon. Obviously I\'m now really, *really* keen to see what happens next!

Marie :-)