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I like this chapter (37) immensely. You\'ve done such a good job with the progression of the relationship between Hermione and Draco that it\'s entirely plausible, and yet the tendency to rush it might be there, but you\'ve managed NOT to. The entire piece is an imminently satisfying read, and you can almost see the tendrils of their relationship intertwining between the \'Capulet\' and the \'Montague\' to the point that they would be willing to forsake all else for each other. I\'d be very sad to see the classic Romeo and Juliet ending, simply because you\'re more clever than that... but perhaps you\'ll use it to your advantage. I will, of course, continue to read eagerly as you post.

Ahahaha. They\'ve settled into couple-sex. There\'s something absolutely adorable about that ^.^ It makes even the smut cute.

HA - I like how she wanted to go out and watch him play Quidditch. Heaven knows I\'d like to do that.

on the Romeo & Juliet: NOOOOOOOO. You\'ve betrayed me ;P when I was first taught that play in an English class, my teacher lectured that it played on the cliches of romance, constantly pounding it into our heads that Romeo was an idiotic hormonal teenager and Juliet the naive fool who fell for his shopworn lines. Henceforth I can never look at that play as being even slightly romantic. Well, I can forgive you, since Hermione\'s reaction was priceless :P and since Draco said \"making love\" - ain\'t he cute?

Good luck on the short story for Raffy, and since I\'m on that ML ;P I look forward to not only that story but the next chapter of Pansy\'s as well :> I\'m really enjoying your writing in this chapter - it felt very natural.

didn\'t mind the fluff. it\'s gotta have one sometime and i think it\'s nice. can\'t wait for the next chap!

Wow!!! Wonderful, wonderful chapter!!! The descent into fluff has payed off amazingly! Please write more!

Great chapter Blue. I especially liked the little bomb about Lucius at the end. And the smut can\'t forget the lovely smut. Sorry I haven\'t reviewed lately, but RL has been an uber bitch lately. I hope RL has been treating you better. Can\'t wait to see what next.

Love it! can\'t wait for more.

Ah.... my fix. Can I have another, please? So good.

I love this story and am so glad you reposted it after the Db meltdown here at AFF. I was wondering what the next hurdle would be and now Lucius will be prancing into the picture - I can\'t wait. There is also all the Gryffindor entanglements to deal with. And hopefully more brilliant smut! (Jeans, black sweater & Doc Martens! *swoon*)
Hope you & your family are well - take care!
I am waiting (not so) patiently for your next update.

First off: \"He was rather enjoying the way Hermione lay snuggled against his shoulder - and the fact that his semi-erect penis was still gloved inside her was well on it

hehehe

i\'ve been checking constantly to see if there were any updates; and the one day that i don\'t, there is. that is just the story of my like ^^\'

back to the story:

the last to chapters have been just great. I cant get the image of Draco in his jeans, sweater and boots out of my head. It seems that it follow me in my dreams for the rest of my life. **drools**

i don\'t know if i\'d mentioned before, but i love the way that you\'ve written Greg and vincent. It was tiring to see them as just the muscle and nothing more.

i love the story; the consistancy of the quality of the writing is very, very commendable. I can only hope to be able to write as well as you do.

uberkudos

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