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I looooove this story so much, I don\'t even know where to start! I stayed up all night reading chapters 1-20-something (whenever it is they finally do the deed, I couldn\'t possibly sleep with all that unresolved sexual tension!). I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Well done.

~Keiko

Another lovely chapter! This is definitely one of the best fics I\'ve ever read. Brava!

Showing Pansy\'s reaction to everything was great. I have my suspicions about Snape\'s lady friend, but I\'ll keep them to myself. :) Looking forward to more.

I am surprised you would say such a thing . You are every bit as talented as all the other writers out there and I think you have a very high chance of winning. Anyways I won\'t talk you ear off much longer here are my comments about the chapter. Absolutely amazing,I just love the interaction between Crabbe , Goyle and Parvati and Neville\'s expression!,priceless. And yes I too am quite anxious to find out just who Snape\'s lady friend is. Rock on!

~Slytherinswn~

In a sense, Pansy gets my sympathy for her misguided way of stalking... er... wooing her intended. Still, her perspective at the start of this story was a nice counterpoint to the intensity of the previous chapter.

LOL at the thought of Draco\'s obvious anger at the \'help\' being misinterpreted by Pansy.

Tonks... hmmm... visiting her \'cousin\' is she? Now, would the Slytherin she visits be a certain raven-haired ex-professor of hers? heh.

*Evil Grin* ;-) I did nominate this one for 3 different awards, so you are very welcome! I am sure I am not the only one though!! And do not worry about who you are up against either, this really is one the top stories out there right now! Good luck and I hope to read chapter 41 soon.

As always, Chapter 40, was deftly done. We get to see a bit of Pansy\'s inner thoughts and her potential for instability and vindictiveness. We also get a chance to see Dumbledore being perceptive, I wonder just what his next manipulation will be, and you\'ve introduced a new potential \'threat\' for Hermione.... maybe. All in all, the tension rises and we\'re not even to Christmas yet. Sigh. So much of the school year to go through (I\'m rubbing my hands with glee to think how many chapters you have to go...).

Brilliant chapter, I think Tonks is with Severus.

Pansy\'s Volcano has a very good chance of winning, the other fanfic writers are most probably saying \"Oh no not Bluemidget\",
stop putting yourself down, you writing is great.

\"She wondered hopefully if their disturbed appearance meant that physical violence had occurred - or even better, hexing?\"

Not exactly the brightest crayon in the box, is she? But it was interesting to see that Pansy had realized that Blaise was probably not infatuated with her or something of that sort. Silly girl.

OOOOH! Snape\'s lady friend AND him finding out about Draco and Hermione on the same day.... you\'re too, too evil. My heart goes out to you. I guessed that it was Tonks, but then again, you\'re such a devious writer I wouldn\'t be the slightest bit surprised if I was wrong.

Now I\'m all curious about who was staring daggers at Hermione, now, and since it\'s probably not Luna... I have absolutely no idea. :P Well, anyway, I look very forward to your latest chapter (I\'m such a greedy person) and this story has truly stolen my heart. Until next time :)

Even though this story has some cliched elements, you have handled the story so well that it feels very fresh and original. You\'ve done a particularly good job with Hermione and Ron\'s relationship; it was very believable that even though Hermione had been attracted to Ron in the past, they waited too long. It was nice to see that you avoided arbitrarily making Ron evil or inconsiderate, and that he has matured a bit as well. Even though Ron and Hermione aren\'t right for each other in this story, I do feel sorry for Ron; I think he\'ll be very hurt when he finds out about Dramione. The smut in this story is just HAWT; witches and wizards must have special sexual stamina comparted to us Muggles. Draco\'s maturation in sixth year was also good, and I like the way you\'ve developed Crabb and Goyle beyond the stupid lumps that they usually are in fanfic. Pansy is sympathetic and chilling at the same time, and very cunning to boot. The volcano was hilarious. It will be interesting to see how Draco\'s very callous treatment of Pansy will come and bite him on the ass; I feel that he deserves some of whatever he gets from Pansy. I do have one question--is Hermione using any sort of birth control? While I could see her forgetting it that first night, she is too conscientious to go on forgetting about it after that.