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Hi Bluemidget!
Wow. Wowwowwow. Wow.
I absolutely adore this fic! I\'ve recently come across this - more or less by accident - and spent days in non-stop reading. And when I was done I started again. Now I\'m reading it for the third time. And I think I can read it a fourth time, and a fifth, and... you get the idea. *g*
Well, it\'s just absolutely GREAT! The plot moves so slowly that the events seem to be real. You made your main characters credible, a thing I find very rarely in fanfiction. And I really love those small things like the cramp-potion Snape\'s brewing for the girls. Never thought about it before, but you\'re right! There has to be something like this! And this adds one more touch of \'reality\' to your fic. Second thing is Crookshanks Kneazel-grandgrand(etc)parent. From his actions in book three and the description of what Kneazel are and what they are like it\'s highly possible that he has indeed some Kneazel in him. I congratulate you for these little things that make the whole seem so real. Such a great story!
And HOT! Whoa, temperature in my room has risen at least 10

you are amazing!!!! You are definitely worthy of all your awards. congrats, and please update soon. I am dying for the story to develop. And will Draco side with Hermione without doubt when his father gets out, or will they go through a period of struggles? and when (if ever?) will they be open about their relationship? I really need more...

i Dont no why but i rember reading the first chapter of this ages go and i was put off by this dont ask me y , i said dont ask me but im glad i did wait ill i read it all know because i would have gone mental waiting for updates and proberly started to cry when the story got taken of AFF y did it get taken of ? i would admit i would have cyred anyway anough about that and more about reviewin the story, as tht is why i am here .

Well what can i say this story is brilliant, not only there being smut (although we had to wait till chapter twenty-somthing but it was worth. more on that l8ter) there is plot what more can u ask for, i like your Draco and hermione there charectorization(sp) are brillaint andeven though they have develpted a realationship there charectorization is still there as in most story it sort of slips

the smut what can i say about the smut ,its just so different to the other D/HR storys aout there although there smut is good, the scenes in your storry stick in my head i dont what you did that is so differently to others.
there are quite alot of line that will stick in my head and made me laugh the first one bein when draco says somthin like \" my lord granger close ur mouth you look like a guppie\"i can see you tongue , i want you to stick down my frought, and secondarly when hermione\'s realization in the mornin after she has slept with MalfOY \"...6 hours of making love, it was sex dont prettie it up\" that made me smile aswell.

Im Really looking forward to the next chapter of this story i hope you update soon

p.s i hope that ur daughter is feelin better

P.s.s I havnt seen any victoria secrets in briatin all but Ann Summer

P.s.s.s i love much ado about nothing as well , I rember havin to do an assay on the video in Englich for my GCSE\'S that was a pain.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for letting us have your first chapter, finally. I have been reading this all day, and I just couldn\'t stop until he had her virginity. Bravo, by the way. Intense.

That has got to be the damn funniest thing I have read in a long time, and coming on top of the excellent smut. I am clearly in the presence of greatness.

I love you.
I love this fic.
There, I said it after months of following and only ever having time to read and not leave a review.
Well there you have it; I am in love.
Seriously.
But I\'ll get over it, when this fic is finished!
Yey for good D/Hr writers!
*huggles*
--Beki
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wOOt!! Go Boston!! Great story love it!

Great story! Congratulations on your win at Dangerous Liaisons, it was well deserved. I know I personally want to know what Draco\'s going to think about Hermione going home for Christmas break instead of staying at school with him in the next chapter, but maybe that\'s just me. Oh, I also can\'t wait for more kinky stuff!!! Great job once again.

This is a great story. I\'m usually into the darker d/h pairings, but the way you\'ve developed the characters, and the underlying plots you\'ve woven are addicttive! I\'ve also been learning a few new words- you have enriched my vocabulary, and givn me the smut I love- good job. Thank you for not juming them right into bed- that usually ruins it. I have one question- when (chpt. 41)Hermione said her parents were going to the local Round Table group- was that literal or just another sly reference to \"muggle\" literature? My imagination is running rampant with images of modern day English people dressed in medival garb. You know like civil war re-enacters?

Bluemidget: I\'ve been following this fic for a while, and recognized your name on the DANGEROUS LIASONS Awards site. Just wanted to congratulate you for your award, and tell you that you totally deserve it for this fabulous fic! It\'s funny, sweet, smutty, and all your characters are extremely interesting. You definitely go all the way with your writing, using painstaking details, original plot lines, clever quips, and developing all the characters completely. This is definitely one of the best longer Draco/Hermione fics I\'ve read. Can\'t wait for you to update this again, I want to see more of this dynamic couple!!