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Gosh, by revealing it in the next chapter, I can\'t decide if that means she IS or ISN\'T pregnant. :P You\'re a tricky, tricky writer.

That was a very spicy love scene ^^ and I\'m glad the issue over Tony between D&Hr was resolved smoothly (although I look forward to seeing Tony try to interfere, too :P) - I\'m glad that they\'re truly blossoming into a really solid couple. Hermione\'s statement at the end of the chapter is just adorable :> I hope they see each other over break!

Lucius seems to be coming back into the picture, so that will be quite scary if that\'s the case. I\'m so happy you updated, I greatly enjoyed this chapter :D until next time!

I think I have now read this five times. I really need to vacuum, so I am glad you updated. To Kylara, Draco \"dresses to the right.\" Translation: His cock is so long, that the top three inches or so need to be tucked one side or the other or he wouldn\'t be able to button his fly. What a keeper. Just a thought, though, Draco is supposed to be left handed, I\'m surprised he would dress to the right. I could think about this for a lot longer... Also, others have commented on Hermione\'s reaction to his jean covered crotch, \"Oh Lord- He\'s been inside me with that.\" Such a perfect line. I\'m not necessarily obsessed with Draco\'s cock, in your description, his shoulders and hands sound pretty good too.

A more realistic depiction of what Hermione Granger would feel.. Finally!!! Thank you!!! Now, she\'ll have something to compare to Draco...

This is the best fic ever! I check this site every single day to see if you\'ve updated! It\'s my absolute fav! You have me so hooked. I love how you write the characters, especially Draco. It\'s friggin awesome.

Er... I don\'t particularly care whether Hermione\'s pregnant or not, it really doesn\'t make a huge amount of difference with a writer of your capability. You\'ll continue to make the story compelling regardless of the direction you take it. So, on to my chapter comments... Ginny was an excellent choice to use for an objective opinion about Tony Goldstein... that gives Hermione more than one viewpoint so that she can more readily believe the truth. Her insecurity is enough to have discounted the idea if it had only been Draco who\'d told her, and then you\'d have a different kettle of fish entirely. I also like the radically different holiday plans, and I\'m surprised that Hermione hasn\'t invited him to her house to meet her parents, although the relationship is still so new and nebulous that it wouldn\'t occur to her, even aside from the fact that it would only serve to drag the outside world into the very early stages of their relationship. I realise I\'m rambling, but I have one last comment. Real, true love occurs at the oddest and most surprising moments and at the oddest of ages. The nice thing about this story is that while Draco and Hermione are teenagers and driven by their undeniably passionate chemistry, you have very clearly laid the foundation for a relationship that is potentially bedrock and lasting. Well done, as always.

Ooh... Sneaky, nasty, twitchy Pansy!!! LOL Heck, ROFLMAO funny!!!!

I love this story. It is a bit on the *long* side, but I believe you (unlike most windbags) will finish it and leave us with an ending that will make our insides turn to mush. Happy writing!

Love the story, but PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, don\'t knock Hermione up. It\'s so overused and all it will accomplish is to cheapen this wonderful story. The star crossed lovers have enough turmoil in their lives that a teenage pregnancy really is unneccesary.

Although I know real life gets in the way of writing genius (insert shameless mentioning of own story \'circle of friends\' as example) I know you won\'t leave us disappointed. A weekly update would be nice....maybe all we need to do is pressure you into writing for us... ;-)

Best wishes,
Elizabeth Jade

*fans self* that chapter was so HOT!!!

Oh I just love love love this fic, I have been absolutely enthralled from the start. It is one of the few fics I will still drop everything and read when I see an update. I love it!!!

Hermione being pregnant was a complete and utter surprise to me, but a good one. I bet you wish you didn\'t mention it now because it would have been one hell of a twist... which it is and I do hope you use it *grin*

I would compliment this fic to the ends of the earth to anyone who ever asked about it because it is so good and very well written and it has a really unique plot. I don\'t want it to ever end *sigh*, I do hope the end is not too near and I hope to hear more from you soon. Well done!

*hugs*

Catphoenix

Your fic is amazing!!! Please please please update soon....please?!! Brilliant last chapter...ah who\'m i kidding, brilliant fic.