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I love this chapter (44) and I love Draco. This was cute about the whole period thing. And as for the length of the fic, I think you should just continue with this, and not make a part two. You never see any good 80-chapter fics any more. :D

Hope the next update comes soon!

--Arien

This is, without a doubt, the most erotic chapter yet of this utterly gorgeous story. I just adore Draco - his realization of just how fortunate he and Hermione have been to date was very sweet, as was his not-quite-subconscious desire to see her carrying his child. Just beautiful. This is one story that I drop everything to go read. As far as the length of it, I think you should do what feels right to you, be it a longer story or a sequel to it. Go with the flow, Blue!

Hey, great chapter. Educating Draco is more fun then having Snape explain about sex to Harry. And trust me those stories are damn entertaining.^.^

Love the story.. keep it going. You\'re an excellent author, and I\'m fairly well read, and don\'t say that too often. Professionally, have you done any writting? If you haven\'t, then you should definatly should. I anticipate you next chapter as soon as I read the current one!

P.S. If JKR gets ill, you can write the last few!

Good luck, and keep writing.
Cheryl

I just noticed that the story is up to chapter 44. I can\'t believe I haven\'t reviewed before now, seeing as I\'ve been reading it from your first post. And here I am always happy when I see an update, because I get a kick out of your characterizations. How ungrateful of me. Dramatic but with enough purpose to keep the plot moving and the consistent humor make this one of my favorite stories, published or not. I also adore your wording style; slightly sarcastic at times, genuine, and just put together in ways I find engaging. I really hope you know that you are a very good writer, plot and language wise, and that your contributions are appreciated.

As to breaking the story into parts: I think that if you\'re going to have more of the story revolve around or if there is a significant portion of the climax concerning Pansy or her Volcano then keep going on as you are. However, if those two elements are dead I would make a Part 2. You may even consider putting the break earlier on in the story, maybe ending the volcano arc just before Tony starts to show too much interest in Hermione. One arc for Pansy, another for Tony, and maybe one for clean-up of other sub plots like Draco\'s handling of his father and the war. Just a suggestion.

Ta\'
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Lovely chapter; you\'ve finally updated! I enjoyed it immensely...don\'t get too preoccupied with reading other fanfics, you\'ve made my day with your update!!

I LOVE this story! I read chapters 1-43 in 3 sittings. You are a very talented author and manage to actaully get a plot in between all the smut. Part two is a good idea. Please update soon! <3 and peace.

I haven\'t reviewed this before, but I just wanted to let you know how much I\'m enjoying this, and I\'ve been following it for several months. I really like Hermione/Draco, but I don\'t read too much because it takes so long to find the good stuff among the mounds of stories by fourteen-year-olds who try to write smut but don\'t know where the clitoris is *rolls eyes*, so this is really fantastic. Also, on the sequel/continuation, I vote sequel. Maybe it\'s my ADD, but I have a lot of trouble following really long stories and staying interested, so a sequel would be better for me.

I\'m happy with the story the way it is. As long as you continue and eventually have an ending I don\'t care how you set up the story. JUST DON\'T STOP WRITING!!!!!

I love this story so much! It\'s the greatest! I swear you\'ve ruined me for other fics. The other\'s just don\'t measure up at all!

Kat P.