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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whatever your heart desires, oh great one, we will follow. nine bless.
Much love,
please for the love of God don\'t keep us waiting for so long.
Eddie
Much love,
please for the love of God don\'t keep us waiting for so long.
Eddie
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like it if you just continued adding onto this one, because when I read this story over and over again, I would rather be able to read it all in one place instead of having to switch midway. I also prefer longer stories. Thanks for updating somewhat regularly. I love your story, and this is my favorite D/Hr story, which is saying a lot. =O)
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! update Everytime you update its like a mini christmas. This is my favorite fic on the weB!! keep it going
Casey
Casey
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the absolute best that I\'ve ever read on this website! I don\'t what link I clicked on to bring me to your story, but I\'m glad that I got to read something so amazing. The whole relationship thing between Hermione and Draco has been done so many times that it\'s very cliche, but you pulled it off flawlessly, with originality. I was so excited to see you had updated. I hope you continue writing and I think splitting it up sounds like a good idea because story is so huge. Anyways, hope you update again soon.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi--
I\'ve been following your story for awhile, since near the beginning, as I\'m sure you know many many other people have as well. So I thought it was due for me to write something.
About the question of whether or not your story should be cut into a second story or continued as one long novel... well, it\'s a tough call. There\'s no arguing that yeah this has become a monster of a story, not that it\'s a bad thing -- What I think is it all really depends on the majority of people, and whether or not they\'re willing to follow it all the way through-- which so far doesn\'t seem to be a problem. The downside to that of course is that, even if people don\'t mean it, a lot look through stories superficially and judge how a story\'s good by its reveiws, or hits, or in your case chapters-- and this story having the number of chapters it has may be intimidating.. even if it does sound silly and which would be a real shame because this story is well worth it. I\'m sure either ways good for the readers who already have read this and continued to do so, and I\'ll be one of them. Good Luck.
- blaZe
I\'ve been following your story for awhile, since near the beginning, as I\'m sure you know many many other people have as well. So I thought it was due for me to write something.
About the question of whether or not your story should be cut into a second story or continued as one long novel... well, it\'s a tough call. There\'s no arguing that yeah this has become a monster of a story, not that it\'s a bad thing -- What I think is it all really depends on the majority of people, and whether or not they\'re willing to follow it all the way through-- which so far doesn\'t seem to be a problem. The downside to that of course is that, even if people don\'t mean it, a lot look through stories superficially and judge how a story\'s good by its reveiws, or hits, or in your case chapters-- and this story having the number of chapters it has may be intimidating.. even if it does sound silly and which would be a real shame because this story is well worth it. I\'m sure either ways good for the readers who already have read this and continued to do so, and I\'ll be one of them. Good Luck.
- blaZe
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m desperately in love with this story. I can\'t wait to read more. I check this site every single day to see if you\'ve updated. I just wanted to cry bittersweet tears when Draco whispered his feelings to Hermione. It was so touching. I love how this story is developing, the way it started out as this passionate, sexual affair and is now progressing into a tentative sort of love. I can\'t wait for more.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Of course that was before Draco Malfoy and his damned uniform and his damned arse.\"
HAHAHA.
Anyway! On the topic of splitting this into two.. well, do as you please, I will most certainly read it wherever you put it ^^ This was originally ten chapters? O_O I must say, though, I\'m terribly glad that this is a \'monster\', as you put it.. all the more to read! I was very pleased when I saw the length of this chapter... so much wealth :> Back to the topic, no matter how or if you decide at all to split it, I look forward to your high quality writing.. whenever, wherever ^^
I -adored- this chapter. I have to say that I -am- happy that Hermione is not pregnant, although with the way you were leading us on, I had prepared myself for the opposite >_> but yes, it\'s quite interesting that Hermione went on the pill herself, that wasn\'t something I was expecting. I was also not expecting Draco to be interested in the idea of her being pregnant (as Draco himself thought unusual), but you wrote it -really- well and very believably. That was a very sweet scene, with Draco thinking of Hermione at Malfoy manor.. it was a very WAFF moment.
Was a little surprised about Draco planning to convince Hermione to sleep with him during her period (that gave me an ick moment), but I\'m sure you can pull it off. It DID make me laugh when Hermione started her \"Eww\" when Draco told her about the panties ^^ that\'s so very Hermione to say that during sex.. haha :> Anyway, I once again look greatly forward to the next chapter, and to seeing how the trip home goes.... :>
HAHAHA.
Anyway! On the topic of splitting this into two.. well, do as you please, I will most certainly read it wherever you put it ^^ This was originally ten chapters? O_O I must say, though, I\'m terribly glad that this is a \'monster\', as you put it.. all the more to read! I was very pleased when I saw the length of this chapter... so much wealth :> Back to the topic, no matter how or if you decide at all to split it, I look forward to your high quality writing.. whenever, wherever ^^
I -adored- this chapter. I have to say that I -am- happy that Hermione is not pregnant, although with the way you were leading us on, I had prepared myself for the opposite >_> but yes, it\'s quite interesting that Hermione went on the pill herself, that wasn\'t something I was expecting. I was also not expecting Draco to be interested in the idea of her being pregnant (as Draco himself thought unusual), but you wrote it -really- well and very believably. That was a very sweet scene, with Draco thinking of Hermione at Malfoy manor.. it was a very WAFF moment.
Was a little surprised about Draco planning to convince Hermione to sleep with him during her period (that gave me an ick moment), but I\'m sure you can pull it off. It DID make me laugh when Hermione started her \"Eww\" when Draco told her about the panties ^^ that\'s so very Hermione to say that during sex.. haha :> Anyway, I once again look greatly forward to the next chapter, and to seeing how the trip home goes.... :>
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just keep going, i love this story and can wait for each new update. besides who cares ho elong it is I\'m reading another story that has over 180 chapters. so keep on going.
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please leave it as it is! It\'s only too unwieldly if the story is dragging on...which it most definitely is not. Keep that chappies coming, please.
Thank goodness she\'s not pregnant! Daddy Draco...not until later (I hope).
Thank goodness she\'s not pregnant! Daddy Draco...not until later (I hope).
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m thrilled with the story as it is. Another HP ship has a completed 162 chapter fic, so I don\'t think PV\'s anywhere near unwieldly in length . Good job with this chapter. I must say that I was perversely hoping for a pregnancy, but your resolution makes more sense. Also, Draco coming to terms with the situation in this fashion was touching and hot at the same time. *shakes head at Draco being jealous of Ron*
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