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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

person TwistedAngel9
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I love the story as it is! This is my absolute favorite Harry Potter fanfic! It is rather long, but it\'s still a great story. I do think branching it off into a Part Two might make it easier to read, however. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!!
person lorett
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL - Firstly, I must say HALLELUJA and THANK YOU for NOT having Hermione and Draco become preganant teens. OH, I was SMILING a mile wide. I KNEW that Hermione wouldn\'t let something like THAT slip by her. She\'s too smart. She\'s too prepared. She\'s too cautious and intuitive. BRAVO! Even though my brilliant Draco got lost in the moment (Maybe subconsciously - he did that on purpose? Especially after just thinking about her carrying his child got him so...er...happy? - GRIN.)

And, about continuing on with this story - why not? You\'re already where you are. We\'re all here with you. Keep going. Unless you wrap it up somehow and start a BOOK 2 - the next phase of their relationship. Everyone finds out...Daddy Death is hot on her heels, they need to flee...Draco has to save her...more hot sex, etc. etc. or something like that.

But, otherwise, don\'t worry. I think it\'s going great and it\'s an enjoyable read. I\'m very pleased.

KUDOS!

Lorett
person BBAnimeAngel91
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! u updated! great stori, as always. And i just wanted 2 say that i think u should just continue 2 add chapters instead of startin fresh cuz i like it right now...but if u do a part 2 i wouldn\'t mind either...so neways...plz update again soon! ^_^
person Allison
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really love your story. I\'ve been reading it since the start of the last summer. It\'s so amazing. I think I\'ve commented before around September, so I thought it should be time that I should add another one. I like how the story is progressing, and how there are some chapters without smut for character development and coversation outside the sheets, even though I do miss it.

Yes, I really like chapter 43 as well. I\'m glad that Hermione is not pregnant. It\'s a little too quick, and ruins the fun too early!!! My personal preference is for you to keep it as one long novel-like fiction, but it\'s not a big deal or a very strong opinion. I just like having other chapters to umm...refer to (^_-), without having to click on a different link.

I was wondering the same thing myself, for a while. Also, I may be weird, but I think that the potential for sex with Hermione having her period is sexy, not icky. Have you read, \"Lights Out?\" It featured something of the sort, and it was written really well about the meaning behind it as well. Also, I liked the fact that I think, you described Hermione, as having \"a slightly rounded tummy.\" I\'m not sure if I\'m reading too much into it, but it seems to say at least, she does not have the perfect, most gorgeous body ever, but Draco still loves her. Because in so many fan fics I\'ve read about them, Hermione has huge breasts and this tiny little waist, etc . . . and it seems really out-of-character and too Playboy-y. Anyway, keep up the great work. I think I\'ve thoroughly embarrassed myself here and revealed a little too much of my kinky side, but Pansy\'s Volcano is one of the best and most realistic fics out there.
person Anu
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again a great chapter. Your writing is consistently good, I can\'t believe it\'s been 44 chapters already and each and every one of them is a gem. You\'ve made my day many times by updating during the past year. I sometimes wish I hadn\'t read this story so I could discover its fabulousness and read it for the first time now, but in that case I wouldn\'t have had the joy of following its progress chapter by chapter. As to the one story or two stories question, I\'m afraid I\'m not very helpful, because it doesn\'t really matter to me. Whatever you write, I will read, period. Thanks!
person Kitty Kat
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really don\'t care what you do, cuz either way I will still be *absolutely* enchanted with this!

Omg! I award you with the gold cup for most and best lemons I have ever read in a story!!!

^_^

for
now:

~Cherrs~

^.^
person keiko
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'d say just add chapters and keep it one story. It\'s nice to have it all in one place.

I love ch. 44! Draco fantasizing about Hermione being pregnant was inexplicably hot.
person Samurai Leprechaun
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
That was such a brilliant chapter
Draco loves Hermione how sweet!
Plus shes not pregnant(whew!)
Please update as soon as you can
(\",)
person Kylara
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the double review, but I was re-reading the chapter (I can\'t tell you how many times I\'ve re-read this by now), and I got to this line:

\"Draco closed his eyes, and tried the words out silently in his head. They sounded right, as if he had solved a complicated puzzle and everything had finally fallen into place.\"

;_________________; That was absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Blue, and I can\'t tell you what a lovely scene that was, with him softly telling her while she slept. Really, really amazing.
person cheeky
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please keep the story going this way as long as you can! I love this story so much! I don\'t have many favorites but \"Pansy\'s Volcano\" is definatly one of them!!! Keep up the great work!~~~Cheeky