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WOW!!!
That was one awesome Story.....I hope to read more soon. Draco Malfoy is HOOOOOTTTT!

Well! Anxiously awaiting the next chapter of this story. I\'ve read up to chapter 43 twice now, and have enjoyed myself thoroughly both times. I must say that this is one fic I\'ll never tire of checking for updates on. Though I don\'t write fic myself at present, I like to think myself quite capable in the English language, and have found your work to be so refreshingly coherent, and beyond! Absolutely wonderful story, and I DO hope you intend on finishing in the (somewhat?) near future? Good luck and best wishes!

Aw... *dabs eyes with handkerchief* Draco admitted he\'s in love... so sweet...
And what in intereting way to find out he is! *g*
What about Hermione now?? Ah, I so want to know what\'s happening now!

I think it would make sense to finish this story and start another, since Pansy\'s Volcano played its part end \'exited\'.
But only if you don\'t call it Pansy\'s Volcano Prt II!! :-)

This story is fantastic, it is well written and fits with mannerisms of JK Rowling\'s writing, even it it has taken surprising turns. I think that you have done an outstanding job, and should continue with the good work, as I am undoubtedly hooked. It would be more convenient to your readers to just continue updating this story, for having to go find a part 2 of this story might be too much effort for some readers, or might confuse people...this way, if you keep with what you have, you will reassure that people will keep on coming back and enjoying your story...which is very enjoyable!!

Chapter 43- I liked that you had Ginny tell Hermione that Tony likes her (Hermione).
The making out in the study area was very hot. Ginny catching them was very funny. Their argument after Draco obliviated Ginny was most entertaining.

I love this story and I am perfectly fine with it as it is. besides, if you cut it into to then i have to make room for it in my recs.

yay! this didn\'t become a pregnacy fic!! woot! and i don\'t think it matters the format you keep the story. what works best for you. we\'ll still keep reading it...

the story is fuckin AWESOME!!!! i think u should definitely keep PV as one long story. it would be cool to have a fan fic that is like 100 chapters long - akmost like a novel! but that is jsut me, it would be really enjoyable. u are also a very talented writer. i think that when ms. rowling completes her HP masterpiece, it would be totally awesome if you would write a story of what happens AFTER Hogwarts graduation. that would certainly be a very interesting read!

I\'ve been reading this since the beginning, so I guess I should have reviewed before now. It should say something that this is the only story I am currently following on a regular basis, having given up on most WIP\'s as either not being worth the wait or due to my being so disappointed when good stories get abandoned. However, I really like your characterization of both Draco (edgy) and Hermione (driven). I wonder how realistic it is for them to have sex every five minutes, but I won\'t quibble about details. I like the story best when it is intense and emotional. I\'m not as crazy about seeing the same scene from two and three different characters\' points of view, though. We can guess at Pansy and Anthony\'s feelings most of the time from their reactions and their conversations with D and Hr. Otherwise, it\'s a very engaging story, and I look forward to seeing how far you will go with it.

I just wanted to add my vote for keeping the story in the same place. It\'s much easier to follow if it\'s all under one title and location.

Keep up the great work!

Hi, Blue!

I\'ve been enjoying your story greatly for quite some time. I don\'t have much time for fandom anymore, but your fic is one that I have to keep up with, for the brilliant writing, plot, and yes, smut. I really liked the latest chapter with Draco being completely surprised by the appearance of Hermione\'s period, and her explanations that she\'d already taken care of it. I was a bit surprised at Draco\'s desires for her to be the mother of his children, but I suppose that would naturally follow with his possessiveness and love for her (though he may not show that quite so obviously).

As for breaking this into two stories - though I understand that the number of chapters is a bit daunting, I don\'t think it would be cohesive to just cut this one off and pick up in another story. There are still a lot of loose ends, and starting a new story would still require new readers to have to read PV before moving to the next one. Perhaps reformatting some of the chapters by putting a few into one later on might make it seem a bit more organized. :)

Looking forward to the next installment, and please take your time with it. I\'d rather have a good chapter than a rushed chapter. Plus I\'ve got finals coming up. ;)