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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It took me a while to get through all the chapters and as you know, the real world does have this horrible habit of getting in the way of all our wonderful stories and fantasies here. I must say, this is a fantastic, well thought out, imaginative, heart felt wonder of a story. I am just impressed with all the detailing, the anxiousness that Hermione and Draco felt and simply enjoying your take on all of the characters. I have not entertained romantic ideals for quite some time but I think you\'ve managed to make me feel like the young girl who wore her rose coloured glasses and still believed in the happily ever after romance stories. I\'m totally fascinated as to where this story will go (not that I want it to end any time soon). I can\'t wait to find out who Sevvie is seeing and what will happen to Pansy and what it is about Blaise that makes him so mysterious and of course, I want to know what\'s going to happen to the gang but most especially what\'s going to happen with Hermione and Draco. I saw this story on the recommended reading list of another author I admire and I am certainly pleased I took up her suggestion and read your story. Well done and I look forward to much more of your wonderful tale.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waiting waiting waiting :P
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well wasn\'t that convinient? Not a day after I finish this work of art, and what d\'you know, another chapter is quietly waiting for me as I return!
This was as usual an excellent chapter; no worries about the lack of Draco, we all know we\'ll get enough ofthat soon to come. I suppose as a reader I needed Hermione to blurt it out to someone just as much as Hermione herself - eventhough it\'s driving me crazy seeing her doubting Draco\'s commitment to their relationship now knowing that he, well, damned well loves her!
Can\'t wait to read Draco\'s own little return. Thing that mostly makes me want to get to the next chapter as soon as possible is the young Malfoy\'s reaction if he finds out about his mother and a certain Head of House, assuming something of that nature could happen over this vacation. Also, can\'t wait to see how he further elaborates about his feelings towards his lioness, especially when (if) he faces his dear father.
And this is just the first day apart, isn\'t it? Wonder if they\'d both be at such a well balanced mental state after all that time... I wouldn\'t be surprised if either one of them would just lose it and if necessary walk all the way to the other\'s residence declaring their undying passion or whatnot they\'d like to call it. Or just grab the Knight Bus... or would that tend too much towards another written Christmas ficlet?... Ok that was pretty lame, I know, but excitement is taking over my sensibility at the moment. Who needs canon when you\'ve got THIS?
Again, a lovely read it was,
-Ruth
This was as usual an excellent chapter; no worries about the lack of Draco, we all know we\'ll get enough ofthat soon to come. I suppose as a reader I needed Hermione to blurt it out to someone just as much as Hermione herself - eventhough it\'s driving me crazy seeing her doubting Draco\'s commitment to their relationship now knowing that he, well, damned well loves her!
Can\'t wait to read Draco\'s own little return. Thing that mostly makes me want to get to the next chapter as soon as possible is the young Malfoy\'s reaction if he finds out about his mother and a certain Head of House, assuming something of that nature could happen over this vacation. Also, can\'t wait to see how he further elaborates about his feelings towards his lioness, especially when (if) he faces his dear father.
And this is just the first day apart, isn\'t it? Wonder if they\'d both be at such a well balanced mental state after all that time... I wouldn\'t be surprised if either one of them would just lose it and if necessary walk all the way to the other\'s residence declaring their undying passion or whatnot they\'d like to call it. Or just grab the Knight Bus... or would that tend too much towards another written Christmas ficlet?... Ok that was pretty lame, I know, but excitement is taking over my sensibility at the moment. Who needs canon when you\'ve got THIS?
Again, a lovely read it was,
-Ruth
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! Its taken me three days of almost non stop reading (and some chapters, re-reading) of this story....
*rubs eyes trying to stifle the blur*
HOLY CRAP! I love love love me some Hermione/Draco....i thought you were gonna have Mione invite Draco to her house....aw pooh. That woulda been kinda cool, but sooo Out of character
Cant wait for you to update (though really you just did)
MAJOR MAJOR PROPS, GIRL!
Mo
*rubs eyes trying to stifle the blur*
HOLY CRAP! I love love love me some Hermione/Draco....i thought you were gonna have Mione invite Draco to her house....aw pooh. That woulda been kinda cool, but sooo Out of character
Cant wait for you to update (though really you just did)
MAJOR MAJOR PROPS, GIRL!
Mo
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again this chapter is perfection......I hope that Draco isn\'t getting beaten or anything REALLY bad.....that would make me a little sad :(
UPDATE SOON!!!
-bob
UPDATE SOON!!!
-bob
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dunno if the term \"Quidditch field\" is correct but I know you refer to it as a rugby pitch not a rugby field. I didn\'t realize Hermione was so Americanized in your story. Sorry I\'m a sports guy and I get anal about these things, just look at my name. The \"L\" doesn\'t stand for what you think it is :)
Hopefully Draco would show himself soon, I found myself getting bored reading about two girls yapping and yapping and yapping about boys.
Hopefully Draco would show himself soon, I found myself getting bored reading about two girls yapping and yapping and yapping about boys.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to let you know that I read all of this in one enormously long sitting! I couldn\'t even stop to review each chapter as I was so anxious to read on! :D
You are extremely talented and I really appreciate the fact that you are sticking to this story when it has gone beyond what you originally planned (chapter wise). Their relationship is written so well. I adore the way that you have let it grow into itself.
I love this work... I am eagerly awaiting an update!
Thank you for sharing it!
You are extremely talented and I really appreciate the fact that you are sticking to this story when it has gone beyond what you originally planned (chapter wise). Their relationship is written so well. I adore the way that you have let it grow into itself.
I love this work... I am eagerly awaiting an update!
Thank you for sharing it!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW i\'m liking it
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m pretty much speechless as I\'m typing this up right now - so you\'d have to excuse my to come rant. Thing is, you have no idea how much I\'ve taken the likes of your story over the past... shall we say month? Yes, seems unlikely as I seen some people claim they\'ve read it in two days - well I\'m just not that quick, I\'m afraid.
I\'ve dedicated about a day for every chapter or two, taking my time to swoon over every single chapter, and I\'ve absolutely fallen completely in love with the plot. Most wonderful of it all was how you took your time, and how unbareably painful it may have been - the actual moment of admitting (and ravashing) was so perfectly inclined with, well, the reader\'s own urging will for them to get it good and well darned on. I remember sitting right here (when was it? Chapter 28? 29?) with a nice big lump in my throat biting into my knuckles after their first intimite rendezvous.
Your humour had me on the floor at times, not to mention other talents of yours that had me on the floor. My favourite chapter of all I must admit was chapter 30, \'the Eruption\' of Pansy\'s little toy. I can\'t say I have ever enjoyed a written piece more than I have reading that chapter... adored every word of it, and even though the smut isn\'t wasted on me - that was really a master piece. We all expected it to happen of couse, but it caught me so off-guard it was delighting (revising my own facial expression afterwards) to read every major character\'s reaction to the girl\'s \'Sezual Szpewing Devizce\'.
But it\'s also (I think) amazing how you kept the readers interest all the way through long after the two smuldering teenagers went about and did it; it wasn\'t even a question of getting there any longer once you got there, because by then the question of how will they and others deal with it, and how far will they go generally was much more bugging me than the actual question of \'when are we getting there already?\' I especially can\'t wait to see Snape\'s reaction, whether he\'s oblivious to the very fact or not, when facing Dumbledore or Draco. Oh, and of course, Pansy\'s own reaction... just in thought it\'s priceless.
And Anthony, the git, he should be the one oblivioused here. Or just put away, simply like that. Preferrebly in a hermitically closed room with fluffy walls. He\'s going to ruin it for all of them, isn\'t he? Gosh, and just when we were having so much fun. Though Ron, the poor idiot. Eh, his reaction is one I won\'t mind fast-forward-ing through. Especially now that Draco has these new found pit of an emotion regarding Hermione... oh, that was so chockingly heart-warming! It was the perfect moment how ever, for him to realise such. And the flashes of the Gryffindore with a swollen stomach, oy, what this story is doing to my hormones! I don\'t know how they are going to make it through the Christmas vacation with out one another, because I for sure couldn\'t make it two straight weeks without this story. Not that I have a choice now, having finished all 45 chapters, and after reading the elaborate comments ending every chapter helping me realise that you\'re more than stacked at the moment only made me dreading the moment I finished more. But we all know it\'ll be worth it anyway :)
Right, I think this would be a nice place to stop babbling on, and let you get on with your work. I literally can not wait until the next chapter, (here would go a sentence along the lines of take your time, but I simply couldn\'t bring it up to type such, please forgive me), and you\'re truely a brilliant - BRILLIANT - writer. My jealously is literally dripping off every word of this rant.
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
I\'ve dedicated about a day for every chapter or two, taking my time to swoon over every single chapter, and I\'ve absolutely fallen completely in love with the plot. Most wonderful of it all was how you took your time, and how unbareably painful it may have been - the actual moment of admitting (and ravashing) was so perfectly inclined with, well, the reader\'s own urging will for them to get it good and well darned on. I remember sitting right here (when was it? Chapter 28? 29?) with a nice big lump in my throat biting into my knuckles after their first intimite rendezvous.
Your humour had me on the floor at times, not to mention other talents of yours that had me on the floor. My favourite chapter of all I must admit was chapter 30, \'the Eruption\' of Pansy\'s little toy. I can\'t say I have ever enjoyed a written piece more than I have reading that chapter... adored every word of it, and even though the smut isn\'t wasted on me - that was really a master piece. We all expected it to happen of couse, but it caught me so off-guard it was delighting (revising my own facial expression afterwards) to read every major character\'s reaction to the girl\'s \'Sezual Szpewing Devizce\'.
But it\'s also (I think) amazing how you kept the readers interest all the way through long after the two smuldering teenagers went about and did it; it wasn\'t even a question of getting there any longer once you got there, because by then the question of how will they and others deal with it, and how far will they go generally was much more bugging me than the actual question of \'when are we getting there already?\' I especially can\'t wait to see Snape\'s reaction, whether he\'s oblivious to the very fact or not, when facing Dumbledore or Draco. Oh, and of course, Pansy\'s own reaction... just in thought it\'s priceless.
And Anthony, the git, he should be the one oblivioused here. Or just put away, simply like that. Preferrebly in a hermitically closed room with fluffy walls. He\'s going to ruin it for all of them, isn\'t he? Gosh, and just when we were having so much fun. Though Ron, the poor idiot. Eh, his reaction is one I won\'t mind fast-forward-ing through. Especially now that Draco has these new found pit of an emotion regarding Hermione... oh, that was so chockingly heart-warming! It was the perfect moment how ever, for him to realise such. And the flashes of the Gryffindore with a swollen stomach, oy, what this story is doing to my hormones! I don\'t know how they are going to make it through the Christmas vacation with out one another, because I for sure couldn\'t make it two straight weeks without this story. Not that I have a choice now, having finished all 45 chapters, and after reading the elaborate comments ending every chapter helping me realise that you\'re more than stacked at the moment only made me dreading the moment I finished more. But we all know it\'ll be worth it anyway :)
Right, I think this would be a nice place to stop babbling on, and let you get on with your work. I literally can not wait until the next chapter, (here would go a sentence along the lines of take your time, but I simply couldn\'t bring it up to type such, please forgive me), and you\'re truely a brilliant - BRILLIANT - writer. My jealously is literally dripping off every word of this rant.
Thank you for writing this amazing story :)
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it\'s me again!
I\'m reading the fic again from the start and I still absolutely love it! I\'m still detecting details I haven\'t spotted before (or re-detecting them?). Really a wonderful story. The charaters seem so real and the way you write is so lively I can see the things you describe happen like I was watching a movie (and, whoa, Draco is HOT! *g*)
And I still love the scene where Pansy\'s Volcano goes off. *lolz*
I hope you update soon - I\'m waiting (not with baitd breath, because I noticed a blue complexion doesn\'t suit, me but impatiently).
Cya, Cira
I\'m reading the fic again from the start and I still absolutely love it! I\'m still detecting details I haven\'t spotted before (or re-detecting them?). Really a wonderful story. The charaters seem so real and the way you write is so lively I can see the things you describe happen like I was watching a movie (and, whoa, Draco is HOT! *g*)
And I still love the scene where Pansy\'s Volcano goes off. *lolz*
I hope you update soon - I\'m waiting (not with baitd breath, because I noticed a blue complexion doesn\'t suit, me but impatiently).
Cya, Cira