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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

person SillyHarriet
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much this is such a great story, although I haven\'t quite forgiven you for keeping us in suspense for 20 CHAPTERS !!!! before they got together ...grr!
But having said that you have been thoroughly repaying your smut debt since then, lol ;). I definitely appreciate you keeping Hermione\'s home life realistic. It wouldn\'t really make sense for her not to be from a private school background. As for faith hill, well i finally gave in and downloaded it and I
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK I am only about half way through this but I have to say that this is quite possibly one the BEST HG/DM fics that I have read. It is so well written, perfectly thought out and the character developement that you have done is astounding. I like that you did not rush into these two hooking up right away as that would have been illogical and way OOC. You have done a tremendous job with this story and I will continue reading the rest of it. I read the first half all in one day because I just could take my eyes away from it so I wouldnt be surprised if I finished the rest tonight. Oh and I just love Draco in this, he has made so many comments that I found myself cracking up at. This story is just wonderful all around, you are a very gifted writer. BRAVO!!!!!!!!
person Shell
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when people just post to beg for updates. So, I really enjoy your fic. It\'s super funny and very well written, and I enjoy the interplay between the two. You keep them both cannon enough to make me happy. She\'s prettier, he\'s less of a, uh, jerk.... but it isn\'t a complete turn around. That being said, I\'m soooo curious about what\'s going to happen with their families. Please, please, get him to the Burrow somehow. That would crack me up. If you can\'t do that just do something. I\'m going crazy here. lol. Update, please!
person Trea
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading your story for a while now, and I just wanted to let you know that I love the story that you have created, and what you have done with the characters. Keep up the good work!
person Ally
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(breathless) WOW!!! (can\'t keep smling) GOD, DO YOU HOW GOOD YOU ARE?? FOR ME YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER IN THE WHOLE WORLD AND I MEAN THE WHOLE WORLD.............I JUST CAN\'T STOP READING YOUR FIC ITS ALWAYS KEEPS BETTER AND BETTER...............GOOD LUCK AND KEEP IT UP
person toni-marie
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey omgosh i jsut want to say i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee your style.. the way you leave things the way you make me see what im reading i absolutely love it!! i can\'t wait til the next chappie =D
c yeahh
person Tyronica
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. I don\'t find my self gagging on fluff, but it is still just fuzzy enough to get me emotionally envolved. Keep this up!
person Lrnd
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha I love how she channels her inner lavender hahahah but good chapter despite sans draco ... girls needs girls
person Ally
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even if hadn\'t finish reading the story yet all I can say is............DAMN, YOUR SUCH A GOOD WRITER.......... WOW!!!!!!...........I really don\'t read a Harry Potter fic. but thanks to you you give me a new outlook in everything..........keep up the good work...........and I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY.............Jane
person genrou
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
46:
yes, i understand the bit about friends/parents and boarding school and being americanized. however, i would understand if the friendships fade as they do , especially being away for that long and at that age. but afterwards you are better at retaining such things especially when your best friends live thousands of miles away.
but i agree with so many in the area going off, retaining those friendships might be easy since the big prospect of returning home would be to see those few espcially in a time where instant comunication is less likely.

but it is cute how she so became gushy around those from her childhood, whose only judgement can be of what you relate to them. and i do wonder if ben will make another appearence later on in. oh and of course if her parently would ask about her hickey.

and yes it must get so frustrating not to be able to fully explain the mind of the wizard particularly when you\'ve mugging them.
i guess the closest thing you can do is say how his family keeps hoping in and out prision for the hate crimes the commit. but that would most likely be more damaging and more unexplainable.