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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

person liizz
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have to admit that I am alittle bit disappointed by this ending (this chapter only) because it seemed so adbrupt (terrible at spelling right now, sorry!)

Other than that, as usualy, I love this story. The rest of the chapter was lovely, and I really want to know what Draco got for Hermione.

I do agree with your part about all of the characters reacting to Harry making it a bit easier to write for HP Stories. I think its one of the reason why writing the stories are so popular. With out realizing it, I think, people some how know that as long as they don\'t write from HP\'s perspective its a bit easier than other stories. (Well, naturally the popularity also has to do with how popular the stories themselves are.)

but you in particular seem to be very good at it. Reactions seem natural, and mature, perfect for the characters age and what they are going through in the stories where maybe other authors of HP fanfic are younger than the characters and write like it. Okay, I don\'t really know what I am rambling about anymore...

But PLEASE! Hurry back from your vacation and continue the story! I am dying here!
person Joy
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome
person cateye91
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals...loudly* yeah! yeah! yeah! u updated...obviously...! i can\'t tell u how thankful i am...the reason for that is 1. i luv ur stori...and...2. i just moved, and i didn\'t have internet for over a WEEK...it was living hell...i couldn\'t do anything...well i did read the 6th harry potter book (which my parents had gotten me as a gift befrore but made me wait till we left 2 read it...which was, once again, living hell...lol) and i found that very good...yes, i am also for ronxhermione...in the CANON pairings...otherwise, it\'s dracoxhermione all the way! lol...perfect chapter (surprise, surprise...lol)...update soon! ^_^
person nat
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok sorry about the harshness of my last reveiw i just cant wait until you update
person Leli
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You now, I\'m actually reading the whole thing for the forth time? I\'m sad, I know. It\'s just too good. I also check for updates almost daily (while I\'m re-reading). Great job.
person Jennifer
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It took me about two days to read this, and I have one thing to say. *stands up and applauds* Bravo! Usually when I read Draco/Hermione, they get together within the first few chapters. While as yours, it seemed, to be forever! But when they finally did!... *more applause* I really liked this! At first I was a bit put off by the title, but someone kept mentioning how GOOD it was, and I can\'t help but agree. One of the best.
I\'ll be awaiting more chapters!
person aindree
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
respek. this has been awesome so far. i can\'t wait for you to finish. i read all 47 parts in two sessions, it was that good.
person Tori
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOUR STORY IS ONE OF THE BEST I\'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!! PLEASAE UPDATE SOON I CAN HARDLY WAIT.
person PinkPig
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmm...I luuuuurved this chapter. Lovely. THe CD wa so romantic and Draco is amazing. I love him. To death. And I am so worried about his father going on parole. EEK! Update as soo n as you can (and I hope your vacation was fun!).
person nat
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are a fucking bitch would you get back from your trip and update