rate_review Reviews

ok so i just read this entire story finally. wow, it\'s very good! i\'m happy you brought up the contraceptive subject, because i was curious about that myself. please update soon, i hate waiting a long time for good stories. keep up the good work!

obviously you aren\'t good at regularly updating so i will give you a tip: your story is good dont ruin it by not keeping up, so type it and post it

sorry if i sound like a total cow but i am sick of waiting

Chapter 39

Finally found time to start getting caught up on this story. And got to say that I\'m not dissapointed. I love the way they interact together. Just so natural. And the scene up agains the wall of pringles office was very sexy. Have I told you that naming him after a potato chip makes me laugh? Maybe it wasn\'t intentional but everytime I read his name the pringles them song plays in my head.

Rain

Now for a big long reveiw! Or at least a big long reveiw from my point of veiw. My reveiws are usually a sentance or two long. Ok I love, love, love! your story! I picked it up from littlexblackxbook \'s xanga awards. This is so amazing. When I first looked at it, I thought, holy crap, 48 chapters? It took me probably 2 weeks to get to this point. It was two weeks well spent! But the begining with Pansy was gross, I knew it was neccesary. And I\'m glad Pansy isn\'t one of the main people, which was my great fear when it was called Pansy\'s Volcano. I still can remember thinking \"will we ever get to the good dramione action? i need some fluff!\" but it was totally fine. I love how long each chapter is. Let\'s just say, I will be sad when it is over! Update soon! I cannot wait for the next chapter!

I have really come to love the fact that you seem to love words as much as I do. I don\'t mean just that you are and auther but you use quite a large variety of words and have even managed to stump my extensive vocab so that I would have to look up words on Dictionary.com(one of my fave sights if that is indication as to how much I love words). Anyways I know that this wasn\'t exactly a reveiw of the story but I had to compliment you on that. Salute!

Well, I\'m only on the 26th chapter now, but I have been reading this story every chance I can get for the past couple of days and I am deeply impressed with it. The writing is excellent and you\'ve made each and every character believeable and real. One thing that I\'ve always thought would make HP fanfic writing difficult is the fact that the characters, although given personality in the books, are not as well-developed as others who you will come across in the world of fiction. They react to situations and people without giving the reader insight to their deepest thoughts and feelings; which is fine because the books are fantasy/adventure stories and work well as they are. However, I love the depth that you have given to both Hermione and Draco, and the nuances that you have given to the rest of cast as well.

You made me absolutely dread having to read about Hermione and Ron\'s break-up, as I felt her trepidation and struggle and his profound shock and sadness. You managed to make her speech very realistic too, everything about that chapter was vivid and real. You also make mention of so many events that have happened over the years at Hogwarts that makes your story seem even more plausible. Real people have memories and reminisce to themselves about where they have been and how far they have come, and this aspect has been left out of a lot of HP fanfictions. You have managed to weave together a story about two people who are struggling with their own feelings and the consequences of their actions with an air of striking realism. I\'ve met a lot of girls just like Pansy in the past, and I love how you\'ve given the characters such freshness and dimension.

I also absolutely love your idea of the 7th year social and the magical words appearing upon the invitations, very creative.

I\'ll continue to read on now, I\'m quite excited for the smut to come ;). You\'ve have written an excellent story thus far, and I\'ll review again once I\'ve gotten a bit further.

I am on Chapter 39 at the moment. Aside from the fact that I got a little confused when you replayed the scene leading to the Breath dance twice in two different points of veiw I have quite enjoyed the Social so far. I am glad that Hermione told Draco that she had worn green for him. I had a question that has been plaguing me. I realize that \"Mina\" is supposed to be short for \"Hermione\" but I haven\'t heard it used before. I was wondering where you got it from. Anyways, I really like the fact that Draco calls her Mina when no one else does because it shows there special closeness(if that makes any sense). Great work overall.

Review part 2

ALSO LOVE: the star wars dance theme; romeo and juliet; the incredible shrinking loveseat; undercover Blaise; \"resistance is futile\"; ginny; the draco/crookshanks rapprochement; and, last but not least, what I sincerely hope is the nude Tonks/Severus relationship thing. YOU GO!

I have to agree with the other reviewers who say that this is one of -- if not the best -- all-time Draco/Hermione fic -- I LOVE IT!!!! You have created great characters -- you know which lavendar-wand-wielding party planner I mean -- and a very believable romantic progression for our couple. Most importantly, kudos on your extraordinarily fine grasp of the mechanics of writing. Give us more!!

As an aside, I have to say that my favorite scenes involve Hermione leaning against Draco\'s chest, and ANYTHING to do with Draco and quiditch.

please hurry with the update!!!

love the story! keep up the great work!