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for Pansy's Volcano

by Bluemidget57

schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm finally finished! I copied your story onto a floppy disk to give to one of my friends who I just sucked into the world of fanfiction, and then took it home and finsihed it. Now I only have one thing to say. Update! I honestly don't know whether to be happy or sad when I finsih a story because it means that, yes, I have finished it and now I know everything that is going on up to that point, but it also means I have to wait for an update before I can read more. It drives me thouroughly insane! Alas, I'll get over it with time. Until then, bluemidget!

'Till a later Review--

Athene
person Draco's Sex Toy
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey..i love your story..its so detailed....and i just love it...please continue writing more chapters.. i love draco, and anything that includes him turns me on...ur a very talented writer and you should think about become an author, people would love ur books, and u would become a millionaire!! keep writing, i cnt wait to find out what happens!!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon...this is the best DH fic ever. period.
person Salome
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shame on you for leaving it there! So does this mean that someone polyjuiced themselves as Draco in order to get with Hermione. I would hazard to guess Anthony Goldstein, but I dunno if he\'s \"slytherin\" enough to try something that risky, and infront of her mom. The suspence is killing me, although I am still most interested in WHO SNAPE\'S LOVER IS! Appy polly loggies for minor caps-lock abuse, though I bet some are worse than others, but I really really really want to know. I\'m not going to tell you to hurry up and update, because I know that patience will win us all a better chapter in the end, but I can hope that more reviews will inspire you to compose the next chapter in adequite time *winkage*

Peace,
Salome
person Salome
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not to spoil you with words of praise, but I LOVE YOUR STORY. I think the greatest quality would have to be that you are able to weave a good plot that fits with the smut inbetween. I can\'t say how many times I\'ve encountered an excellent smut fic with a horrible plot and some OOC characters. You manage spectacularly to make everything believable and interesting. When I first started reading I was wary about making it through all 50 chapters, but that doesn\'t seem to be much of a problem now. I also really love the side plots. I am ultimately intrigued as to know who Snape\'s mysterious lover is. It wasn\'t confirmed to be Narcissa, was it? I am leaning towards it possibly being Mandy Brocklehurst, for reasons of Draco\'s mysterious faith in her, and what she said to Hermione. There\'s more to her than is being let on, I think. It does sound like Draco at least knows that Snape has a lover, but does he know who it is? Of course I could be totally off since Snape makes comments about \"hormone driven teenage girls\" and would probably not comprimise his teaching position for one. But I can hope, can\'t I? If you could give me even a smidggen of a clue, I would heart you forever!

Peace,
Salome
person TNgirl
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and update!! I\'ve read this story in one sitting and I can\'t wait to see what happens next! This is a great story! I love it! I hope Hermione and Draco don\'t fall apart too much, as you predicted, it would break my heart! I\'ll be watching for an update, please don\'t make me wait too long!! Thanks!
p.s. I saw in an earlier A/N that you mentioned the title of this story... I, too, skipped over this story several times before deciding to read it because of the title. I understand it now, of course, but at first it made me wary. Keep up the great work!!
person Jessica Hurkmans
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgggg......i\'ve been reading this whenever i get the chance its thanksgiving and i spent all my time readin it...i just bursted out into tears when hermione broke it off with ron i seriously just started balling!!! wow...im sad
oh i come from Upper Michigan in the US... Keep writing its awesome you do such a good job...
jess
person anonymous
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve already read this once but i thought i would read it again. the first time i was \"chasing the storyline.\" this time i\'m getting to revel in your beautiful writing. this is my absolute most favorite DMHG fic ever. also my favorite fanfic ever, period. it\'s beautiful. you don\'t rush things. you take it slowly and make things REAL. in chapter 16, i felt like i WAS hermione granger. i can\'t put into words how good this is. pleez keep updating.
person Sasha
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I\'m a reader from Missouri. I stumbled across Pansy\'s Volcano a few days ago, and haven\'t been able to stop reading. Lol, I\'ve even been putting off some of my homework from college to continue reading. I just finished the last chapter that you\'ve added, and I\'m looking forward to the next one! I always enjoy finding stories that are good, and really long, so I was excited when I found this one. I absolutely love how you switch around to show what all of the people involved are feeling in the story, and the way you showed Hermione\'s home life is exactly the way that I\'ve always pictured it. Keep up the good work! I\'ll be anxiously waiting for you next update!
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As an avid ferret lover, (owning 5 myself! or is that, \"being owned by...?), I just wanted to point out something in a paragraph in chapter 11, during Mione and Ron\'s talk about inter-house halloween dates by the lake.

\" At least he