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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Agian great job on this chapter. I like that now you have established that D and H are together, now they have to focus on maintaining the relationship. Amazing development.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH6
Ah, poor Ron, he\'s going to be the victim of Hermione\'s \"idon\'tknowwhatImdoingitis\". So now Draco knows Hermione is interested in him, but he\'s gone and jacked things up (grin) by pissing her off. Hormones and enotions, what a fun mess they make.
Ah, poor Ron, he\'s going to be the victim of Hermione\'s \"idon\'tknowwhatImdoingitis\". So now Draco knows Hermione is interested in him, but he\'s gone and jacked things up (grin) by pissing her off. Hormones and enotions, what a fun mess they make.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH7
Well, Hermione may have made herself feel better by telling Pansy she wouldn\'t spy for her, but now she has a nice new enemy. And Draco certainly has a vivid imagination. Excellent job so far keeping the people in character!
Well, Hermione may have made herself feel better by telling Pansy she wouldn\'t spy for her, but now she has a nice new enemy. And Draco certainly has a vivid imagination. Excellent job so far keeping the people in character!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH8
I was wondering why this story was called Pansy\'s Volcano, question answered. I have to admit I feel somewhat sorry for her, even though she\'s a manipulative wench. Even Blaise has gotten the best of her, though she really only has herself to blame. I do enjoy your take on Blaise, he\'s brilliant and practical and much more interesting then the average supporting character in stories. Well done. And crap, I was wrong about Draco being hexed if he masturbated, oh well, I love stories that knock me for a loop. As for Draco, I\'m curious to see what he\'ll do now that he knows he\'s basically free of danger.
I was wondering why this story was called Pansy\'s Volcano, question answered. I have to admit I feel somewhat sorry for her, even though she\'s a manipulative wench. Even Blaise has gotten the best of her, though she really only has herself to blame. I do enjoy your take on Blaise, he\'s brilliant and practical and much more interesting then the average supporting character in stories. Well done. And crap, I was wrong about Draco being hexed if he masturbated, oh well, I love stories that knock me for a loop. As for Draco, I\'m curious to see what he\'ll do now that he knows he\'s basically free of danger.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH9
Hmm...Dumbledore has decided to get involved. Well, they\'re doomed, they should just give in now. I thought it was funny how the couch kept shrinking, I\'m sure he did it on purpose. Ron is not going to like this at all, can\'t wait to see how he reacts. And I wonder what Draco\'s going to think of Hermione\'s outfit? Hopefully Draco\'s going as Han and not Luke, considering in the first movie most people thought both men were after her...
Hmm...Dumbledore has decided to get involved. Well, they\'re doomed, they should just give in now. I thought it was funny how the couch kept shrinking, I\'m sure he did it on purpose. Ron is not going to like this at all, can\'t wait to see how he reacts. And I wonder what Draco\'s going to think of Hermione\'s outfit? Hopefully Draco\'s going as Han and not Luke, considering in the first movie most people thought both men were after her...
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH10
I knew it! Dumbeldore is matchmaking, the man sees everything. Oh, and you have Severus getting a little side action. I wonder who his little witch is? Not surprising she figured out Dumbledore\'s plan, women can usually spot a matchmaker. I liked her thoughts on Ron and Hermione\'s relationship, makes perfect sense. So now Hermione and Draco will be constantly thrown together. How cruel of you!
I knew it! Dumbeldore is matchmaking, the man sees everything. Oh, and you have Severus getting a little side action. I wonder who his little witch is? Not surprising she figured out Dumbledore\'s plan, women can usually spot a matchmaker. I liked her thoughts on Ron and Hermione\'s relationship, makes perfect sense. So now Hermione and Draco will be constantly thrown together. How cruel of you!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter 34! The conversations were really witty... especially between draco, crabbe and goyle. Can\'t wait for the next chapter! I must say again how thrilled I am that you reposted... sorry you had to go through the trouble, but I am so glad you did!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was fun. I think everyone\'s been guilty of a little forbidden lust/love once in their lives. But a man actually having introspective thoughts on his emotions...how unique. ;)
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH2: Nice to get Hermione\'s POV. She\'s much too logical for her own good. Perhaps being swept away by Draco will be good for in more ways then one. Though of course I forsee problems with Ron in the not so distant future. I enjoy the humor you have included, and the erratic behavior which is always a sure sign of a person with a crush...
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For CH3
Ah, Draco has hired a spy. And Blaise seems very wise for his years, especially when it comes to women. I think Draco\'s already felt the effect of the infidelity spell; the story mentioned an itching sensation earlier...
Ah, Draco has hired a spy. And Blaise seems very wise for his years, especially when it comes to women. I think Draco\'s already felt the effect of the infidelity spell; the story mentioned an itching sensation earlier...