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for In the Halls of Malfoy Manor

by MistressLupin

schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!

You shouldn\'t worry about your chapters being short. I don\'t think that they\'re that short. Especially not when you publish this often :o)

So Mr. Malfoy was expecting her after all (if he is the one in the doorway).

I expect the next chapter will be quite - uhm - interesting :o)

Keep up the great work.

Love Leonora.
person lysa1
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. This is the Lucius we
person Sanjana
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh please you gotta update soon!! im totally loving it!! i love lucius
person Whisper!!!
schedule December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter was pretty good, Hurry up with the next one please!!!
person rubberduck
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story. sad for pansy that draco is a selfish prick in bed, but that actually goes with his nature. i don\'t think pansy will find true happiness in the malfoy family, but maybe who knows. draco can give her love and support (that\'s how you describe their relationship) while lucius can give her sexual satisfaction. can\'t see it ending well though. but it was a hot little scene in the study. wow. can\'t wait for more.
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was just wonderful!

So I was right! Mr. Malfoy did see her watching them, and from his behaviour I take it that he is not quite the loving, faithful husbond I thought he was. He is the wicked (distinguished) and cold (attracting) Lucius Malfoy that we know so well.

I wouldn\'t want you to end the story too soon :o) But still I\'m curious about what kind of an ending you have in mind - very curious! So in a way I\'m torn in two.

Keep up the good work!

Love Leonora.
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Draco\'s young, his skills in the bedroom will improve, he should read some books on sex, no doubt Lucius probably has I see him as that type of man always wanting to be the best at everything Severus too.
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

I still like your story very much! So someone saw her watching Draco\'s parents??? OMG! Did Lucius notice her watching them?? That would be very interesting!!

I love your other story as well, but I hope you don\'t leave me waiting for another chapter for this story for too long :o)

Very nice work!

Love Leonora.
person Psyche
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This seems good so far its gettng interesting cant wait to see what happens next.
person julia
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really liked the new story...vair kinky. lol. but keep goin with it!