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for Here & Now

by Phantomtale

schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was great---4
person Reyn
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo! the plot thickens. I\'m totally intrigued now. update!!
person Elke
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Laughing my ass off!

I love this story. tons of sex (and sexy sex at that, none of that sterile crap!) it\'s great.

I\'m looking forward to learning more...like who that guy (the dark haired one that kissed draco in diagon) is & more about the twisted lives of our boys.

I\'m glad that Snape realizes that harry isn\'t a total loss...even if he might not totally approve of his & draco\'s relationship, he obviously cares enough to help draco & to be upset with the remus situation (where he thought they were banging) &/or by using that premise to his advantage (or rather draco\'s) by telling (egging on) Draco.

please keep writing great chapters like this.
person ura
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice story. please continue to write.
person starlollie
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it very funny just great
person Parvati
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naked Harry & Draco! Spanking, restraints, chases.... this fic is so yummy. And now you\'ve got a plot. HURRAH!!! Let\'s hope it doesn\'t get in the way of all that fantastic smut. ;)
person Reyn
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alrighty, so it looks like this is getting turned into a full fic. YaY! I must say, you had me momentarily confused when it said \'flu\' instead of \'floo\' I readlly had to stop and read through that a few times before it clicked.

Other than that, still as good as ever. Keep it up ^_^
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I also love how Draco has no modesty. Excellent. lol...ooo, a chocolate frog!...lol...that cracked me up. Mione\' nodding in agreement that they look hot together. lol. Great chapter. Please keep up the amazing work and update soon!!!

-Black
person Delphyne
schedule February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! i want to see Hermione and Ron find out; it\'d be really awesome if it happens with Snape there.. oh the serious snarking. More Remus, please? OH! And can we find out who the person is? Tee-hee.. I want more!!!!! Give me, please?
person Arwen
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG..honestly, it\'s stories like this that make me wish there was some kind of a filter that could separate the good stories from the bad ones. I mean, I just clicked on your story by chance, it didn\'t have many reviews or anything, and it turns out to be the best written and hottest things I have read in a long time. Seriously, it was SO, SO GOOD! Everything, the emotions, the characterization, and OMG, the sex! So hot!!

I just love your writing style. It\'s so intense. Gosh, this story should have a little gold frame that says - Read this, it\'s WAAAAY better than most others on this site.

Great job. You have to write more. If not this story, then another hot H/D story. You owe it to the world. You\'re too a writer not too. You owe it to Harry and Draco, really. You know they want to shag, and you write it so well!

Write more!! Please!!!

:)

Cheers,
Arwen