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for There Was No Light

by BelledonnaSnape

person Carol Oster
schedule September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying. I'm so crying. I'm going to cry a long time. This was... so painful... beautifully painful. Thank you. Going off to cry now.
person RedRaven
schedule February 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update with the next chapter soon!!! It's a really great story!! xxx
person Alaizabel
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL!! I frikkin love your fic. So wonderful. My beta told me about it and i've been glued to my screen ever since! do you email reviewers when u update? i know that alot of writers on here do off to do that, so if you have a list, please add me to it! Cant wait for the next chappie!
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. Please update soon.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i've REALLY got into this!! i'm intrigued to the point that it's making my head spin a little!
this is really good and i'm loving the direction it's going in
one thing at the end of the last chapter you talk about christian.... did i miss somehting or was that supposed to be corvus?
it might just be myy blondeness and i missed something
still good though so keep it up *hands you a cookie*
person aeronwy
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I did a straight read through and I have to say that they longer chapters flow better overall. Your chapters aren't the marathons that some authors produce. This last one was a eprfect length.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So bittersweet, Harry doesn't know Sev lives and from what I understand Sev doesn't know if Harry lives either. Yet they yearn for each other tremendously. I hope you bring the two together.
person Miya Kendrick
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I flippin love your fic. Its so...deliciously angsty. I love angst. ^^ And Snarry. Mmmmm angsty Snarry...Neways. Can I be put on that list too? Pretty PRETTY please? ^O^ Ceeya! Can't wait for the next update!...No, seriously. XD Love!
schedule October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods...
Your story is an addiction and a half.
'Tis refreshingly fleshy (no pun intended) and well written.
If you still need a beta,
(though in my humble opinion your story is INCREDIBLE without one)
I would be honored if you would allow me to beta for you. =^_^=
If you want, drop me a line at ShyGirlAtTimes@aim.com and
give me a rundown of what you require in a beta.
Does it help that I'm an English major?
-DefiantOne
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow this is so beutifully written with the thoughts of what seems a broken mind so perfectly detailed pleas pleas contiue.