rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

hey I really love your story! You have such a creative way of looking at things from Hermoine\'s point of view. I really want to read the next chapter, see what Donnie and Adrian (Sev\'s cousin?). Oh i can\'t wait! Oh, and for the beta job.. well I\'ve never done the beta job but I have some free time because I\'m taking a break from my story. So update soon please!

I didn\'t think I would like the story while Hermione was depressed. Now that\'s she\'s turned around I love it. It\'s also very funny.

Bring on the Snape Stuff.

Hi,

first of all, I like this story, even though its AU.
Second: My english skills are very limited, but I think there a quite a few grammar mistakes in your text, maybe somebody should beta your story.
Third: Keep writing !!!!

Rebecca:-)))

you werent kidding when you said this was AU(so I was warned, lol).... hmmm... I dont like when the characters act out of character. My own personal opinion is that if you are going to do that, you might as well not bother using characters like Hermione.Harry and Ron... Better to use Lavendar,Neville, and some other fictional HP character.... but thats just my opinion... A little childish and black and white (either they are just evil or good, which people never really are) but pretty well put together for a first fic (my first was complete and utter dreck..lol)..... Keep working on it, keep trying and maybe next time, if you want to write against character, use characters that arent as set in stone, if you get my drift...

Great!! A refreshing new approach, I loved it!

This is really good, could you please e-mail me when you update this, if it\'s not too much trouble?

Sincerely,
Meep

THAT CHAPTER ROCKED , I SEE YOU HAVE READ MY LITTLE SIDE ADVISE, AND TO BE TO THE POINT LET OUR GIRL [MIA OF COURSE ] HAVE SOME WANDLESS[POWERFUL] MAGIC, ANDLET HER BE A SERIOUS ASS KICKIN FIGTHER. I SAY WERE SNAPE GETS TURNED ON BY IT YOU KNOW I\'M LOVE IN THE STORE KEEP IT COMING. LATER MUCH ROCK ON DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can\'t believe how awful these people are! Hopefully they will see how wrong they are...and how cruel and worthless. Argh! Bravo to Snape for doing what he did. Oh, please post more soon!!! There is no way that can be left alone.