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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story so far. please update soon. please do another sex scene bewteen the two. please let lucuis out of jail and switch to the light side. please let servus and harry become pregnant.
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I'm always checking for updates. Please keep it up. I so want to see how this ends.
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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Out of all the elements I would say Darkness and Fire suit Draco best. Though just for saying it Earth and Light/Heaven would suit Harry.
Darkness would suit Draco because he was born into a world of darkness he would be most use to it and more comfortable with it than Light. Plus it suits his personality.
Fire would suit him because he name means Dragon and he tends to have a fiery passion hiding inside him waiting to be exposed. Plus it would be really well hot to see him control Fire.
Oh and if you're curious why I choise Earth and Light/Heaven for Harry it is this:
Harry tends to be more grounded and down-to-earth than any other character. Sure he has his moments of loss of control but who doesn't. Plus he seems more powerful than any wizard which would suggest that he is more in tune with the Earth which is where I believe magic originated.
Light/Heaven is an obvious choice for Harry. He is the epitome for all things Light. He is pure and sweet and always fights for the good side.
Anyways awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Ja ne ^___^
Darkness would suit Draco because he was born into a world of darkness he would be most use to it and more comfortable with it than Light. Plus it suits his personality.
Fire would suit him because he name means Dragon and he tends to have a fiery passion hiding inside him waiting to be exposed. Plus it would be really well hot to see him control Fire.
Oh and if you're curious why I choise Earth and Light/Heaven for Harry it is this:
Harry tends to be more grounded and down-to-earth than any other character. Sure he has his moments of loss of control but who doesn't. Plus he seems more powerful than any wizard which would suggest that he is more in tune with the Earth which is where I believe magic originated.
Light/Heaven is an obvious choice for Harry. He is the epitome for all things Light. He is pure and sweet and always fights for the good side.
Anyways awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. Ja ne ^___^
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am on chapter 3 so far so good i liked the fact that harry and snape can have a civil conversation.. i will review again at the end thanks
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is written very well, but i still am having trouble with the Harry/Malfoy thing. Oh well, you also should have someone else read your story and fix the spelling mistakes.
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far it's rather amusing Question however If Snape and Lucious (sp) are mate then how is it that he's married to Draco's mother? Will that be explained when Harry and Snape have a little chat?
Um Also When is x-mass coming into the house? lol Its been mentioned and all but nothing really solid yet...
Oh and what happened with the headmaster's plans? I know someone is out to do something but again it hasn't been shown quite in the lime light yet... So your apparently going to go on with this story for some time to come..... I LOVE THAT mind you but oh I'm so exited (hehe) Still getting use to the whole Male Preg thing but it's getting easier to accept.
Now in your writing you seem to need to work on some thing like the words their, they and so on words like that have been miss used during your story (simple thing really and very easy to fix) but its nothing that should throw you off cause it's easy to understand what is meant.
Update soon, love
~Ero
Um Also When is x-mass coming into the house? lol Its been mentioned and all but nothing really solid yet...
Oh and what happened with the headmaster's plans? I know someone is out to do something but again it hasn't been shown quite in the lime light yet... So your apparently going to go on with this story for some time to come..... I LOVE THAT mind you but oh I'm so exited (hehe) Still getting use to the whole Male Preg thing but it's getting easier to accept.
Now in your writing you seem to need to work on some thing like the words their, they and so on words like that have been miss used during your story (simple thing really and very easy to fix) but its nothing that should throw you off cause it's easy to understand what is meant.
Update soon, love
~Ero
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it sooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Someone needs to explain everything to Harry! I sooo need chapter 25!!! As for the elements Draco is usually seen with water - ice prince. And it suits him perfectly. But what about light, energy?
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just found this story! Love it. Please update soon.
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! During the past few days i have searched the Harry Potter fanfiction for a story that can keep my intrest. When i looked at your summary and saw all the pairings that i love i told myself to read it and see if i liked it. I did, this is a really great fic and even though i don't really like stories that have the author's own character inside; i truley enjoyed this fic and was wondering if you could perhaps update or send me an explanation of why you don't? Thank you for writing a very enjoyable fic and i look forward to your response.