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Interesting. I\'ve sat and read the eleven chapters in their entirety, and do hope that you will continue writing. Update soon!
GM

Pure yumminess! This story keeps you enthralled at every turn. However, I do think you are toying with us stopping where you did! You tease! LOL I really enjoy your story, please post more soon! I am eagerly awaiting the conclusion (mmmmm...) of this situation.
heeheee.

Let me tell you, you are the best author I know yet the worst sumarizer! I would have never guessed such a brilliantly hot and enticing story like this could come from a summary saying that this was your first D/Hr fic and act as though it\'s your normal everyday fic. If I had a story this good, I would brag about it! Anyway, as I said, I absolutely LOVED it. It went in so many different directions that it had my head spinning but it was fabulous all the same. I really was hoping from the beginning that they would have a threesome.......I didn\'t really like Pansy involved though, don\'t really like her much.......this was so brilliantly written, youre descriptions are amazing and the idea for the story is so origianal and I can\'t wait to read more. I have to admit that though I\'ve never read any Tonks fics before, this one actually kinda turned me on with her and Draco and all that though I do prefer him with Blaise and Hermione anyday. The only thing about this story that really irked me was that Harry/Narcissa stare........that was creepy! Anyway, please update as soon as possible, I loved it!

P.S.
If your interested, you should post this fic at http://www.quietones.org a Draco/Hermione/Blaise archive where your story will get more exposure from tons of D/Hr/B fans.........plus they have pictures of Blaise.....yummy......

Woo hoo! Come on!

Please! When are you ever going to update this story. It has been like what seems forver sine you last did. Okay only like two months, but still! I love this story so much! Anything that involves the three of them is more than worth reading!
And i think you have stayed perfect to there characters, I think you are a masterful writer especially at the way you have written this.
PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as you can!
PEACE Isa

ahem.... get cracking on another chapter.... months cant go by, Draco is going to have blue balls by now from waiting so long. never mind what you are doing to hermione and
Blaise!

WOW! I have flown through these first 4 chapters on a lazy Sunday afternoon, and I\'m just in love with the story! Normally, I\'m a really bad lurker, but your Author\'s Note at the end of chapter 4 coerced me into telling you... GREAT JOB! I think your characterisations are spot-on. I find it believable that Draco would have gotten his initial experience through his father\'s call girls. Also, I don\'t think I\'ve ever actually read any Hermione/Viktor, but you make it so hot and so feasible. The way Hermione would give in to him because she understood that he had true feelings for her. The way Viktor \"instructs\" her. Oh, it\'s just so sexy! Brava! The exchanges between Draco and Hermione thus far have been electric. I really liked the one right before he met Lisa. The flashbacks are steamy and well-timed. Sometimes when I\'m reading flashbacks, they feel forced, but yours really mold with the rest of the story. And what else? OH YEAH... the conversations between Draco, Theo and Blaise are outstanding. This is exactly what I imagine teenage boys to talk like when they get together. I love Theo\'s slowly evolving fashion sense (teehee!), and Blaise \"getting it off with his cousin in a vineyard\" really made me giggle. Actually, there\'s quite a bit of clever humour in this fic. I salute you on a job well done! Your Draco thus far is very canon. And I agree with you about Hermione. This \"modern\" Hermione makes a lot of sense, and it\'s nice to see her be given some sexuality. Like you said, she\'s not asexual! She has desires and weaknesses, just like the rest of us, and just like any other teenage girl. What excellent work! And now I am off to keep reading... :D

Hee! In case you haven\'t noticed, when I come out of lurkdom, I come out with a bang. ;) So here are my reactions to chapters 5-7 (and I REALLY REALLY LOVE this fic, if you can\'t tell):

WHOA! The \"wanking incident\" with Blaise in chapter 5 was absolutely scorching. (I\'m a die-hard Blaise/Hermione fan, so I had to stop myself from doing a little dance.) I love the whole idea of the Slytherin boys competing against each other like this. And your Ron characterisation is awesome. I can see him being just as spiteful and heartbroken as Hermione, reaching out for anyone who could ease his pain. (Also, I giggled over Ron couped up in his room listening to sad songs like a girl. LOL.) I don\'t like it when people make Ron out to be just some stupid sidekick, and you\'ve done a great job of justifying his actions and giving him his own sensuality.

And chapter 6 just got better and better. Hermione as the teacher was so very sexy. Not to mention that your Blaise is about the finest thing in the Western Hemisphere. *drools* Oh, and the Armani trousers! I laughed my ass off over the fact that Draco tried to convince his mum that Armani was a wizard so he could get himself a pair. Ha!

Oh OH OH! The debacle in chapter 7! That was just brilliant. Harry\'s one line (\"She\'s not shagging him!\") was so well-timed and deliciously innocent. Draco\'s ire was squee-worthy. And Blaise and his \"mostly legitimate\" family with their mafia wars over olive oil imports had me absolutely cackling. (Maybe I should mention that The Godfather is my first true love.) You have very cleverly worked politics and prejudice into this fic, and I adore you for it. And I don\'t care how het this fic is... the Harry/Draco banter had me bouncing in my seat. I do love me some Drarry. Also, a very original spin on the marriage law union.

I am SO HOOKED. *applauds*

Oh no! I ran out of fic! ;)

Oh. My. God. Chapter 8 was one of the weirdest and funniest things I have ever read. The announcement was totally unexpected, and what a show-down! (

Pleeeeeeeease update soon! I\'m freaking dying here!