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by AureliaFlint

person merryday
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO HOT!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter - go Hermione! And wow, I had never thought of Victor Krum as sexy before but your portrayal was so, so naughty/sexy. There is definitely something to be said for the inoocent schoolgirl/experienced man seduction fantasy.
person rubberduck
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww. unrequited love. how tragic. hermione is being very spiteful though, but young people are often like that. i think if (when?) ron finds out about any dalliances hermione has with a slytherin or two he will be very hurt. seeing that hurt will make hermione regret her actions. but just between you and me, it will be a very hot ride. that was a very steamy scene in the prefects bath. it was awesome.
person jessika
schedule November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a great start, i agree about the characters being more realistic... i really enjoy what you\'ve wrote, so please write more soon. :)
person Cwolf
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you should put this in the Hermione/Draco section. This story is way too good to be looked over.
person Cwolf
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad I looked one when I got to this section. For some reasons the updates are not showing up on the first pages; same thing happened to my stories. Anyway this is one of the most well writen stories I\'ve see here. I love what you did with the characters. This may become my new favorite.
person jeannette
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you make draco and hermiones first time really hot and heavy. show him that hermione is really too hot to handle.
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

This is really really good, and very well written! I like the way you keep Draco into character. And I like the way you picture Hermione!

I\'m really looking forward to your next chapter!

Leonora.