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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great job!
I love hermione\'s back story and everyone else\'s personalities!
update soon!
I love hermione\'s back story and everyone else\'s personalities!
update soon!
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK just a quick word about this fic...................WOW............... i mean OH MY GOD That chap was so hot i think i need a cooling charm or at least a few more chapters.
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! I especially like your characterisation of Hermione, I think it is realistic that she would behave the way she has. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!! I want to see what happens with Blaise!!!
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is delicious, I cant believe it hasn\'t got more hits. I think you are spot on that Draco has been panting to \'have\' Hermione since she slapped him and this fic is skirting around that nicely. Great Zabini action as well.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the new chapter i was so disapointed that i couldnt keep reading, this is an excellent ficcy. please keep writing FAST..lol
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You always amaze me. Your characterizations are spot on. Thank you. It\'s gems like this that keep me coming back to fanfiction. I\'d beg for more posts, but I know it\'s the holiday season so I won\'t.
Much.
*in best little Oliver voice* Pwease may we have some more?
Much.
*in best little Oliver voice* Pwease may we have some more?
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you certainly know how to write a compelling story with interesting likable characters. i really like your take on pansy and blaise (even though i think blaise should be a girl lol) hell, all your characterizations are cool. i thought the part where blaise asked draco about his plot and draco said \'which one?\' was brilliant. i can\'t wait to see the fireworks you have in store for these characters.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was so good! I love the way you\'re making Hermione strong and independent. I can\'t wait to see Malfoy\'s reaction to this.
Looking very much forward to your next great chapter.
Love Leonora.
Looking very much forward to your next great chapter.
Love Leonora.
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Aurelia, I made my way here from the dhrcomm. I\'m so glad you updated and what a mighty twist you\'ve made in Chapter 5!! ^_^ Poor Ron and Hermione, I wonder why so many people notice Hermione\'s attraction to Ron, but nobody\'s mentioned (to Hermione) Ron\'s interest in her.. or do they just chalk it up to his flirtatious ways?
I like that you\'ve included Theodore Nott in Draco\'s circle? I haven\'t read much about him, but ever since JKR revealed that she has a scene planned in her mind involving Draco and Theodore.. *hearts* it\'s been so tempting. In other words, I like Draco\'s new mates. All sexy, all cunning, *oooh!*
Can\'t wait to see where you take this story! ^_^
I like that you\'ve included Theodore Nott in Draco\'s circle? I haven\'t read much about him, but ever since JKR revealed that she has a scene planned in her mind involving Draco and Theodore.. *hearts* it\'s been so tempting. In other words, I like Draco\'s new mates. All sexy, all cunning, *oooh!*
Can\'t wait to see where you take this story! ^_^
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione\'s character rocks in this. Just can\'t get over how good your story is. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.