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by AureliaFlint

person Dreamweaver
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep those posts coming. This is brilliant. :)
person rubberduck
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your stories. i don\'t usually come right out and say that, but let\'s give credit where credit is due. your characterizations are deep and realistic. you give each character such life (stuff i\'ve said many many times, but always so true) i really like how you are portraying draco. he\'s a right scheming bastard, but he also has heart. i actually feel sorry for him and his breakup with pansy. now i see even more parallels between this story and \'the luckiest man...\' of course, katie\'s comments to the gryffindor table make it seem like she\'s not really into the betrothal. i\'m still trying to work it out. back to this story though. i hope we get to see more of pansy. i like the idea of her going after harry. that would be funny. i can\'t wait to see how draco plans to fulfill his fantasy with blaise and hermione. i think that will be so hot.
person eve/roarke
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are brilliant, what a chapter, it had everything. Back stabbing, wonderful smut and our naughty Blaize just
stiring everyone up.

Your writing is just great, more please, I\'m a addict I need at least weekly fixes. Update soon, Goddess of the pen.
person destiny black
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.It\'s nice to see an actual plot in your story, rather than loads of sex.Not that the other ones with Marcus and Katie were bad, it was just them fucking everytime you read a new chapter, but it was still good as hell. I can\'t wait to read the sequel. Keep up the good work.
person Shannon
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!! Yay an update!! This is getting really good! It is wierd for me, I am so used to the Marcus/Katie world from you that I forget who I am reading when I read this. I love it though and I can not wait for more!!
person Truitt
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great plot and I loved that last scene! Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!
person greer
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Bah, Blaise is a little ho. Hermioned should tell them both to go to hell and find herself someone better.
Plus Tonks and Draco are just so wrong, yuck. But sorry, I really do enjoy your story! Your pacing is much
better than others that sometimes rush to the sex way too fast. Draco needs to suffer now, he\'s getting too
cocky with all this easy sex, lol.
person Blance DuBois
schedule February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this fic and so far, I\'m quite impressed!

I found one thing questionable though. (on ch 6)
Based from personal experience, it usually takes a while before a guy ejaculates for the second time.*winks*
person Shannon
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ll be buggered!! I lost my internet for a week and came back to not one but two updates!! Woohoo!! This is getting intresting to say the least. ; ) I can not wait to see where you are going with it. Hpe to read more soon!
Peace!