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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it makes sesnce but it needs more elabaration. maby talk about the thought put in to chosing HG or waht pansy\'s reaction was. perhaps include repeated atempts at conseption. this is a good story for your first time and if you wanted it has the potental to be more than a one shot.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s different,interesting,odd and oddly enough I hope you will continue this um fic I guess.
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was twistedly good. You have a very good imagination and a gift at writting. Pity though, you seem like you do not wish to pursue with this plot...
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very unique plot you got here. I
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November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story was a change of pace. i really liked it. please update soon.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome buildup but the actual sex was really short.