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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please tell me u have more!!!i need more!!!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. update soon
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so are you going to update or what? i like this fic. not lik the others you see here....continue the fic
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not great, not original. Bad actaually. It\'s like every other fic on here. You have the potential; what are you going to do with it?
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought it was very good. please email me when you get a new chapter up. but you said she had pink nipples and then turned around in the next paragraph saying she had brown nipples. with hermione\'s complexion and all her nipples should be pink. not brown.
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December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all, especially for your first fic. It does, however have a few typos in it. Perhaps thinking about a beta would be a good idea. Other than that keep it up.
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, I\'m curious to see where this goes.
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn\'t remember if I reviewed this story or not. But don\'t you think that Hermione would have first been a little hesitant about the idea?? Oh well, that\'s just my opinion... Update soon. Pretty good so far!