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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good building point with this second chapter.... although I do hope we get a better glimpse at the change in Draco and what exactly happened after the defeat of voldemort. I like it! I can\'t wait for Hermione to arrive at Snape\'s... Very Interesting! Much better spelling and grammar in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool beans dude
seriously, i like the plot you have going, so please keep writing!
great great great great
seriously, i like the plot you have going, so please keep writing!
great great great great
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November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, this is getting interesting. You should still proofread but I really like it. What was that look of concern Draco had??Hmm, I guess I\'m going to find out.
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this beginning... so many great possibilities. Your writing is very good, only a few minor glitches here and there, but nothing to worry over. I do hope you continue with this fic, it has great potential, and I must say this is a beginning that I am not familiar with... so bravo for stumping me, as I am something of a DM/HG fanatic, which is well known to many. Many fics all sound the same, but you really have something here, keep going! I\'ll be waiting!
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its a good start
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November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good so far! What will happen next? ;-)
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good good good goood
so uh, more?
please
its really good, and i like the way you have started it, its gonna be a great story, so PLEASE write more
so uh, more?
please
its really good, and i like the way you have started it, its gonna be a great story, so PLEASE write more
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lots and lots of spelling mistakes, even characters\' names. It get distracting after awhile. You may wish to get a beta to read the chapters before you post them.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, but there are a lot of mistakes. Keep updating though, because i would like to see were this goes.