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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you know I loved it but I had to write it here for the whole world to read......please do work furiously on the next chapter.....
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated this. I am enjoying it immensly. I absolutely adore you\'re Draco and Severus. More soon please.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHHH YOU EVIL.............
That was ok but you had better put up the next chappy
SOON!
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I realllllllyyyyyyyy wanta see what happens. plz e-mail me
when the new chap is posted.
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inuyasha_zealot16@yahoo.com
Love SAVANNAH
That was ok but you had better put up the next chappy
SOON!
......
I realllllllyyyyyyyy wanta see what happens. plz e-mail me
when the new chap is posted.
......
inuyasha_zealot16@yahoo.com
Love SAVANNAH
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice like what you got, needs some more plot but still good. You are going to have to email me when you update. I am not a maber of adultfan.net or what not. so let me know when you post next.
Dracolov
Mr. big bad
It was nice, kind of long winded, but thats ok.
Dracolov
Mr. big bad
It was nice, kind of long winded, but thats ok.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey it Amanda. This story is getting dense. I hope Draco can protect Hermione.
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its a quite good start, however, there are some flaws;
Lucius has threatened Hermoine with kidnap, also he attacked her parents house, surely Severus should have arrested him, put him in a body bind and waited for the Ministry, who are searching for him?
But I am a sucker for Hermione/Draco so hopefully there will be reasons Severus did not.
Lucius has threatened Hermoine with kidnap, also he attacked her parents house, surely Severus should have arrested him, put him in a body bind and waited for the Ministry, who are searching for him?
But I am a sucker for Hermione/Draco so hopefully there will be reasons Severus did not.
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s going good... the closeness between Draco and Hermione is a little hard to understand. Perhaps it could be explained some in future chapters. Also you need to reread a few parts as there are a few places I think you got excited about writing and typed the wrong word. But other than that, no glaring mistakes. I love the plot... Keep up the good work!
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking the story but I don\'t know if I buy the Draco changing so quickly. I hope that at some point you give a little more background as to when his feelings for her changed and how. But other than that I think it\'s a good start and I\'m anxious to read more...could you email me when you update since it\'s time consuming to check daily on the boards???? Thanks if your able to do so.
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
by the way if you need a beta, I would be happy to help...email me if want to...
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November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like it