AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Gryffindor and A Slytherin

by Ashley579

person ghypscee
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes, you should continue. everyone hits roadblocks, but something will come to you, just don\'t make it too long-i am not known for my patience!
person tygress
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this. I know that blocks can be so frustrating, but you are doing wonders writing after the blocks. Please keep it up as I look forward to the next installment.
person ceci58113
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i thought it was great kept on going!
person MoMalfoy
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pleeeease continue the story! i really like it!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue with this story because i want to see how it turns out in the end and if hermione and draco are able to get together properly.
person Sarah
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing. I really really like it!
person chris
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
think about it, this i a good plot and can be easily continued. if u need help with it, i offer my services. it could use some work yes, but it can go far IF you choose to continue it. write me back ok?
person Savannah
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok here goes...
That chapter didn\'t completely suck....
It looked like you were trying to just fill space....
It was kinda bad, I know you can do better...
If your having writers block......
Go to the last couple of chapters, reread them, and ask yourself what you want the charecters to do.......
Put them in any situatuation, no matter how ridiculous and then edit....
Remember it\'s YOUR story....
You can make them do anything!...
I think this story is great and I would like to see more.
I know how bad writer\'s block sucks.
Lotsa Love and Luck
Savannah
person Kiki Malfoy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I truely hope you continue on with it. And the last chapter didn\'t suck....think of it as a stepping stone in the plot. Everyone hits mental blocks now and then. If need be, take some time, maybe read other fics, get your brain flowing and continue writing at your leisure...
person pinky
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While I admit that last part wasn\'t the greatest, I think it could get so much better as you continue on. I absolutely love the theme for the story, and I hope that you do continue it.