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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Keep up the great work and update when you can. Don\'t worry about writers block it happens to the best of us. If all else fails ask the readers to give you some imput on what they would like to see happen and roll with it.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only on the first chapter, not too bad, I would say that you need a beta, to help you clean up some of the tense and word usage errors... You also need to think about how the characters talk in the books... Hermione is an English girl... She isnt GONNA go to a store, she is going to go to a store.... Things like that stick out at me, and make it hard to believe that these are situations that the characters of JK could be in.... Not a bad first start though. Everyone starts somewhere..
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very good and I hope you write more on this story.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i love the story, but if you are going to end with a cliffy, then you at least have to do one more chapter!!!
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January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, your back. Oh I can\'t wait to see what was in her letter. Please hurry!
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, finally more of this. this part was good, I especially loved it when Ginny confessed what she did. *g* Never read a G/S one before. what\'d Lucius write to Hermione? Now i\'m all curious and can\'t wait for more.
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey your doing great dont be so hard on your self i think the chapter was very good
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think you shoud stop writing this, as i think you are going somewhere good with this story. If you re having writers block, what I suggest you do is either get a \'beta\' reader, so they can go over your work to check it or you find a author that you respect their writing for, and ask them if they would help you with a few brainstorming ideas. That\'s what I have done when I used to get writers block, and now if is no longer a problem for me :) Anyway, good story, plot etc.
~ Mercika
~ Mercika
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really really like the story and the last chapter didnt suck. you should keep writing it please!!!
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December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really really like the story and the last chapter didnt suck. you should keep writing it please!!!