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it is good,,, no it doesnt sux. I like the by-play for Ginny and snape. keep up the good work!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that last part was totaly cute. and the part when Ginny asked Snape if he wanted a quick snog was the best i nearly peed my pants laughing so hard update soon

great now just keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!

Honestly, it needs work. lots and lots of work. great plot, love the way its going, but your grammer errors and misspelled words were rather distracting. also, the chapters lacked detail and organization. but do not give up! it takes a thousand and one failures to produce a masterpiece. as long as you are trying, people will read. -sound fields of dreams-ish-so keep pluging away, try to tighten and edit your work a little more, ask for advice and proof-readers and you will get loads better.
may the Nine watch and guide your way,
much love,
Eddie

I like the twist that you took with this chapter (especially while betaing it as it didn\'t need any real changes)..keep up the good path and can\'t wait for the next chapter...and no it doesn\'t suck....

This is a very good story! I think you should continue it and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Oh, hardy har har indeed! Fabulous, darling. I know about blockage, and I have to say, it\'s gotten a lot better since you\'ve gotten past it. It\'s a great story, and I like where it\'s going. I hope to see some ACTION soon, please, but take it at your own pace. I\'ll check back on it.
-Kat

I liked it!! Please update soon!!!

omg that was soo good and well worth the wait, and i cant wait for the next chapter!

i really like this story but i wish that you would update sooner