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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the idea and plot, but the characters are way too OOC for me to enjoy the story. You should have built it up more instead of thrusting the ideas onto the reader all at once. The best thing about stories is the anticipation, you need to build to the climax. You definitely have potential though.
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September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well i liked it. hope to see more.
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update please!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good good need more keep writing plz!!!!!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this every to be continued?
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update best fanfiction i\'ve read in a long time
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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
need more! plz continue wid it plz thanxz in advance
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OmG! This is so good! I really love this story. I\'ve been trying to write my own story but have been having the same problem as you, everytime I read it, it doesn\'t sound right. A true writer never likes their work at first. Keep up the great work!